学习— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，表达不够自然。建议简洁明了地说明过去的职业和当前的学习状态，避免重复。

範例: I used to work as a doctor until two years ago, but now I am preparing to pursue my PhD degree.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和重复，且表达不够流畅。建议使用连词连接句子，使表达更连贯，同时注意时态一致。

範例: I study at home because I need to take care of my child in the morning, so I usually study at night when it's quiet, which helps me concentrate better.

建議: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议直接回答问题，并用连词连接理由，表达更自然。

範例: No, I don't think home is a good place to study because I have to take care of my child. I prefer the library since it is quieter.

建議: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简洁表达想法，注意主谓一致和时态，避免重复。

範例: Yes, I would like to change my study environment, but it's difficult because my children are very young and I need to take care of them first.

建議: 回答不完整且表达不清晰。建议明确说明未来的学习计划，使用完整句子和恰当的词汇。

範例: In the future, I plan to prepare thoroughly for my studies by reading relevant materials every day.

× Uh, to be honest, I used to be a doctor two years ago but I resigned 2 years ago, but now I am preparing for supplying my PhD degree.

✓ Uh, to be honest, I used to be a doctor two years ago but I resigned 2 years ago, and now I am preparing to pursue my PhD degree.

句中“preparing for supplying my PhD degree”用词不当，应该用不定式结构“preparing to pursue”表示准备攻读博士学位。这里涉及动词搭配问题，属于过去时态和动词用法的结合。

× I studied in my house and I must take care of my child in in the morning, so I have to I have to study in night, but night is very quiet.

✓ I study at my house and I must take care of my child in the morning, so I have to study at night, but night is very quiet.

“studied”时态不符合现在的学习状态，应使用一般现在时“study”。“in in the morning”重复且介词用错，应为“in the morning”。“study in night”介词错误，应为“study at night”。这些都是介词使用错误和时态错误。

× No, I think it isn't a good place 'cause you 'cause you. You must take care of your child in the house.

✓ No, I think it isn't a good place because you must take care of your child in the house.

句中“'cause you 'cause you”重复且不完整，应该用完整的连词“because”连接句子，避免重复和断句错误。属于连词使用错误。

× I prefer library to house 'cause library is more quiet.

✓ I prefer the library to the house because the library is quieter.

“library”与“house”前缺少定冠词“the”，且“more quiet”比较级错误，应为“quieter”。这里涉及冠词使用和形容词比较级错误。

× Yeah, I want to do some changes in my place which I study in, but to be honest it must be any chance 'cause my children are too, too young. I must be take care of him first.

✓ Yeah, I want to make some changes in the place where I study, but to be honest, it can't be any chance because my children are too young. I must take care of them first.

“do some changes”应改为“make some changes”；“which I study in”应改为“where I study”；“must be any chance”语法错误，应为“can't be any chance”；“my children are too, too young”重复逗号不当；“I must be take care of him”动词形式错误，应为“I must take care of them”，且“children”复数，代词应为“them”。涉及代词错误和动词搭配错误。

× I'll make at least to do some preparing for my study and read and read the list every day.

✓ I'll at least prepare for my study and read the list every day.

“make at least to do some preparing”结构不正确，应该直接用“prepare”；“read and read”重复，应去掉重复。这里涉及将来时态表达和句子结构错误。