学习— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答有些语法错误和表达不自然，比如“on the May this year”应为“in May this year”。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并且回答时尽量简洁明了。

範例: I worked for three years, but I quit my job in May this year.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，比如“on the behind of Taiwan”应为“across from Taiwan”。建议使用更准确的地理描述，并避免重复使用“beautiful”。

範例: I study in Xiamen, a beautiful city in southeast China, located across from Taiwan. My university is well-known for its scenic campus.

建議: 回答中有语法错误，“I'm not like it”应为“I don't like it”。建议避免口头语“Umm, uh”，并且用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: In summary, I think it is a good place to study because it is a highly ranked university in China. However, I don't like the weather here because it is too hot.

建議: 回答表达不清晰且语法错误较多，如“I'm making changes right now”不明确，建议直接回答是否想改变学习地点，并用正确的时态和表达。

範例: Yes, I want to change the place where I study. After graduating with my bachelor's degree, I decided not to pursue my master's at my mother's university but to study elsewhere.

建議: 回答内容较好，但有语法错误，如“a masters degree”应为“a master's degree”，“different culture”应为“different cultures”。建议注意冠词和复数形式的使用。

範例: I'm planning to pursue a master's degree in the US or UK because I want to experience different cultures and learn new skills such as digital marketing or data analysis, which are very useful nowadays.

× I have already worked for three years but I just quit my job on the May this year.

✓ I worked for three years but I just quit my job in May this year.

The present perfect tense 'have already worked' is not appropriate here because the action is completed and specific time 'this year' is mentioned. Also, 'on the May' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in May'. Use simple past tense for completed actions at a specific time.

× I have already worked for three years but I just quit my job on the May this year.

✓ I worked for three years but I just quit my job in May this year.

The preposition 'on' is used for specific days and dates, but 'May' as a month requires the preposition 'in'. Also, 'the May' is incorrect; months do not take 'the'.

× I started in the southeast of China, Xiamen, a beautiful city on the behind of Taiwan and my university is famous for its beautiful and nice view.

✓ I started in the southeast of China, Xiamen, a beautiful city behind Taiwan, and my university is famous for its beautiful and nice views.

The phrase 'on the behind of Taiwan' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'behind Taiwan'. Also, 'view' should be plural 'views' to match the context.

× I started in the southeast of China, Xiamen, a beautiful city on the behind of Taiwan and my university is famous for its beautiful and nice view.

✓ I started in the southeast of China, Xiamen, a beautiful city behind Taiwan, and my university is famous for its beautiful and nice views.

Using both 'beautiful' and 'nice' together is redundant. It's better to use one adjective or combine them properly. Also, 'view' should be plural 'views'.

× But uh, the weather here is too hot and I'm not like it.

✓ But uh, the weather here is too hot and I don't like it.

The phrase 'I'm not like it' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'I don't like it' to express dislike.

× after my graduation from my bachelors degree, I didn't accept the offer to pursue my master's degree in my mother's school but want to change another.

✓ After graduating from my bachelor's degree, I didn't accept the offer to pursue my master's degree at my mother's school but wanted to change to another.

Use 'after graduating from' instead of 'after my graduation from'. Also, 'in my mother's school' should be 'at my mother's school'. The phrase 'want to change another' is incomplete; it should be 'wanted to change to another'.

× after my graduation from my bachelors degree, I didn't accept the offer to pursue my master's degree in my mother's school but want to change another.

✓ After graduating from my bachelor's degree, I didn't accept the offer to pursue my master's degree at my mother's school but wanted to change to another.

The verb 'want' should be in past tense 'wanted' to match the past action 'didn't accept'.

× I think it is very useful nowadays such skills.

✓ I think such skills are very useful nowadays.

The phrase 'very useful nowadays such skills' is awkward. The correct order is 'such skills are very useful nowadays' to properly quantify and describe the skills.