学习— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答基本清晰，但有语法错误和表达不自然的地方。建议使用单数形式'master's degree'，并且可以更自然地表达，比如说“I am currently pursuing my master's degree.”

範例: I am currently pursuing my master's degree at university.

建議: 回答内容完整且信息具体，但句子结构可以更自然流畅。建议使用更自然的表达方式，如“I study at the Graduate School of XJTLU University, located in Suzhou, which is in eastern China near Shanghai.”

範例: I study at the Graduate School of XJTLU University, located in Suzhou, which is in eastern China near Shanghai.

建議: 回答内容丰富且连贯，但可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。建议在句子间加入连接词，如“Moreover”或“Additionally”，使表达更自然。

範例: Yes, it is a good place to study because it offers a diverse and international atmosphere. Moreover, there are many foreign students, which helps me broaden my horizons and learn about different cultures.

建議: 回答内容具体且有细节，但开头的“Uh”显得不自然。建议避免使用填充词，直接开始回答，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: I think the place where I study is quite comfortable because it has free Wi-Fi and air conditioning. Additionally, it provides essentials like water and tissues, which makes it very convenient for students.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议简化句子，避免错误词汇，清晰表达计划。例如：“After I finish my postgraduate studies, I plan to start working. I don't want to continue studying further at the moment.”

範例: After I finish my postgraduate studies, I plan to start working. I don't want to continue studying further at the moment.

× I am still a student and I am now pursuing my masters degrees.

✓ I am still a student and I am now pursuing my master's degree.

The phrase 'masters degrees' is incorrect because 'master's degree' is a singular noun referring to a specific academic qualification. The correct form uses the possessive apostrophe 'master's' and the singular 'degree' since the student is likely pursuing one degree. Using 'degrees' plural is incorrect here.

× I study in Graduate School at XJTLU University in Suzhou, which is in the east of China, near Shanghai.

✓ I study at the Graduate School of XJTLU University in Suzhou, which is in the east of China, near Shanghai.

The preposition 'in' is not appropriate before 'Graduate School' when specifying the institution. The correct preposition is 'at' to indicate the place of study. Also, 'Graduate School at XJTLU University' is better expressed as 'Graduate School of XJTLU University' to show the relationship between the school and the university.

× Yes, it is a good place for study because it offers a diverse and international atmosphere.

✓ Yes, it is a good place to study because it offers a diverse and international atmosphere.

The phrase 'a good place for study' is less natural than 'a good place to study.' The infinitive form 'to study' is commonly used to express purpose, making the sentence more fluent and grammatically correct.

× There are many foreign students, which helps me broaden my horizon and learn about different cultures.

✓ There are many foreign students, which help me broaden my horizons and learn about different cultures.

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to 'students' (plural), so the verb should be 'help' (plural) instead of 'helps' (singular). Also, 'horizon' should be pluralized to 'horizons' because the phrase 'broaden my horizons' is the correct idiomatic expression.

× Uh, now I think the place where I study is quite comfortable.

✓ Uh, now I think the place where I study is quite comfortable.

No grammatical error detected in this sentence related to the provided grammar problem types.

× It has free Wi-Fi and air conditioning, and it also provides essentials like water and tissues, which makes it convenient for students.

✓ It has free Wi-Fi and air conditioning, and it also provides essentials like water and tissues, which make it convenient for students.

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to 'essentials' (plural), so the verb should be 'make' (plural) instead of 'makes' (singular) to agree in number.

× Well after my I finished my post graduate study I plan to go to work.

✓ Well, after I finish my postgraduate study, I plan to go to work.

The sentence mixes past tense 'finished' with future plans 'I plan.' Since the plan is about the future after completing study, the present tense 'finish' is appropriate here to indicate a future event in a time clause. Also, 'post graduate' should be one word 'postgraduate.' Commas are added for clarity.

× I don't want to Forza my study.

✓ I don't want to force my study.

The word 'Forza' is incorrect and likely a typo or mishearing of 'force.' The correct verb is 'force.' Also, 'force my study' is unusual; it might be better to say 'I don't want to force myself to study' or 'I don't want to force my studies,' but based on the original sentence, correcting 'Forza' to 'force' is the minimal correction.