学习— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你嘅回答基本上清晰，但語法上有少少錯誤，例如「I'm major in」應該係「I'm majoring in」或者「I major in」。另外，可以用更自然嘅表達方式，例如「I'm currently studying international business」會更流暢。

範例: I'm currently studying international business at university.

建議: 你嘅回答簡潔明確，但可以避免使用縮寫（GD, UFS）因為考官可能唔熟悉。可以加多啲描述校園嘅特色，令回答更豐富。

範例: I study at Guangdong University of Foreign Studies, which has a beautiful campus with modern facilities.

建議: 你嘅回答有啲語法錯誤，例如「please peaceful」應該係「very peaceful」。另外，「walks」用得唔啱，應該係「work」或者「studies」。建議用連接詞令句子更流暢，例如「because... and... Additionally...」。

範例: Yes, it's a good place to study because the environment is very quiet and peaceful, which helps me concentrate better. Additionally, everyone around me is highly focused on their work, creating a productive atmosphere.

建議: 你嘅回答結構清晰，內容具體。不過可以用多啲連接詞令句子更自然，例如「because... so...」。另外，「tiny space」可以用「small space」會更自然。

範例: I wouldn't want any changes in the place where I study because I prefer a stable and quiet environment. I like to have a clean desk and a small space, so keeping everything the same helps me stay focused and productive.

建議: 你嘅回答有語法錯誤，例如「I make may take」應該係「I may take」。另外，句子有啲冗長，可以分開講，並用連接詞令句子更流暢。

範例: I'm still considering my future study plans. I might study abroad to gain international experience, or I may take a master's entrance exam to continue my studies domestically. Both options have their advantages, so I need more time to decide.

× I'm currently a student and I'm major in international business.

✓ I'm currently a student and I'm majoring in international business.

動詞 'major' 在此句中應使用現在分詞形式 'majoring' 來表示正在進行的動作。因為 'I'm' 是 'I am' 的縮寫，後面接動詞時需用動詞的現在分詞形式。

× I'm studying in GD, UFS, Guangdong University of Foreign Studies.

✓ I'm studying at GD, UFS, Guangdong University of Foreign Studies.

在表示學習地點時，應使用介詞 'at' 而非 'in'，因為 'at' 用於指明具體的學校或機構地點。

× Study, yes, it's a good place to study because the environment is very quiet and please peaceful which helps you concentrate better.

✓ Study, yes, it's a good place to study because the environment is very quiet and peaceful which helps you concentrate better.

形容詞 'peaceful' 前不應加副詞 'please'，這是誤用。應直接使用形容詞 'peaceful' 來描述環境。

× Additionally, everyone around me is highly focused on their walks and creating their atmosphere for study.

✓ Additionally, everyone around me is highly focused on their work and creating their atmosphere for study.

此處 'walks' 應為 'work'，因為語境中指的是學習或工作的專注，而非散步。這是詞彙選擇錯誤。

× I might study abroad to gain international experience or I make may take a master entrance exam to continue my study domestically depending on which option suits me better.

✓ I might study abroad to gain international experience or I may take a master entrance exam to continue my study domestically depending on which option suits me better.

'make may take' 是錯誤的詞序，正確用法是 'may take'，表示可能性。此處應刪除 'make'，只保留 'may take'。