学习— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như "blossoming my degree" và "study allow me". Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, trực tiếp và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

範例: I am currently a university student studying science. This allows me to gain important knowledge and skills for my future career. Moreover, being a student gives me the chance to meet new people and join various academic activities.

建議: Bạn cần trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng ngữ pháp chính xác. Câu trả lời hiện tại không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy nói rõ bạn học ở đâu và mô tả môi trường học tập một cách đơn giản, mạch lạc.

範例: I study at a secondary school where the teachers are very supportive. They always help me understand difficult topics and encourage me to ask questions when I have problems.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ ý kiến của bạn.

範例: I think it is a good place to study because I can meet new people and learn a lot. For example, the school offers many activities that help me improve my skills and develop myself.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và khó hiểu. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích cụ thể những thay đổi bạn muốn thấy ở nơi học tập.

範例: Yes, I would like some changes. For example, I hope the school can offer more training programs and hobby clubs to help students develop their skills and interests.

建議: Câu trả lời chưa hoàn chỉnh và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên nói rõ kế hoạch học tập tương lai của mình bằng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lỗi từ vựng không phù hợp như "have oils".

範例: In the future, I plan to continue my studies and become a doctor. I want to gain the necessary knowledge and skills to help people with their health.

× I am a student blossoming my degree in in the sciences at university and study allow me to focus on gaining knowledge and skill that will help me in the future career.

✓ I am a student pursuing my degree in the sciences at university and studying allows me to focus on gaining knowledge and skills that will help me in my future career.

The verb 'blossoming' is incorrectly used; the correct verb is 'pursuing' to indicate working towards a degree. Also, 'study' should be 'studying' to function as a gerund subject, and 'allow' should be 'allows' to agree with the singular subject 'studying'. Additionally, 'skill' should be plural 'skills' to match the context of multiple abilities, and 'future career' needs the possessive 'my' to specify whose career is meant.

× I am a student blossoming my degree in in the sciences at university and study allow me to focus on gaining knowledge and skill that will help me in the future career.

✓ I am a student pursuing my degree in the sciences at university and studying allows me to focus on gaining knowledge and skills that will help me in my future career.

The phrase 'in in the sciences' contains a repeated preposition 'in'. Only one 'in' is needed before 'the sciences'.

× Additionally, being a student gives me that opportunity to meet new people and participate in various academic.

✓ Additionally, being a student gives me the opportunity to meet new people and participate in various academic activities.

The word 'academic' is an adjective and needs a noun to modify. Adding 'activities' clarifies the meaning. Also, 'that opportunity' should be 'the opportunity' to indicate a specific opportunity.

× I'm standing at the secondary school and the teacher is always supportive me to gaining the more knowledge and when I have a question and or the mistake of the teacher is always teach me and love the problem.

✓ I am studying at the secondary school, and the teachers are always supportive, helping me gain more knowledge. When I have a question or make a mistake, the teachers always teach me and help me solve the problem.

The original sentence has multiple structural issues: 'I'm standing at the secondary school' is incorrect; 'studying at the secondary school' is appropriate. 'Supportive me to gaining' is incorrect; it should be 'supportive, helping me gain'. The phrase 'and or the mistake of the teacher is always teach me and love the problem' is unclear and ungrammatical; it is corrected to express that teachers help when the student has questions or makes mistakes.

× I'm standing at the secondary school and the teacher is always supportive me to gaining the more knowledge and when I have a question and or the mistake of the teacher is always teach me and love the problem.

✓ I am studying at the secondary school, and the teachers are always supportive, helping me gain more knowledge. When I have a question or make a mistake, the teachers always teach me and help me solve the problem.

The preposition 'at' is acceptable for location, but 'standing at the secondary school' is unnatural; 'studying at the secondary school' is better. Also, 'supportive me to gaining' misuses prepositions; 'supportive' should be followed by 'of' or rephrased as 'helping me gain'.

× I'm standing at the secondary school and the teacher is always supportive me to gaining the more knowledge and when I have a question and or the mistake of the teacher is always teach me and love the problem.

✓ I am studying at the secondary school, and the teachers are always supportive, helping me gain more knowledge. When I have a question or make a mistake, the teachers always teach me and help me solve the problem.

The singular 'teacher' is inconsistent with the plural context; it should be 'teachers' to indicate more than one teacher. Also, 'the more knowledge' should be 'more knowledge' without 'the'.

× I think it's good because when I go to school I meet new people and I have gained more knowledge and I think in the school I have many opportunity to improve my skill and improve myself.

✓ I think it's good because when I go to school, I meet new people and gain more knowledge. I think at school I have many opportunities to improve my skills and improve myself.

The phrase 'I have gained' is past perfect but inconsistent with the present tense context; 'gain' is better. 'In the school' should be 'at school' for location. 'Many opportunity' should be plural 'many opportunities'. 'Skill' should be plural 'skills'.

× I think it's good because when I go to school I meet new people and I have gained more knowledge and I think in the school I have many opportunity to improve my skill and improve myself.

✓ I think it's good because when I go to school, I meet new people and gain more knowledge. I think at school I have many opportunities to improve my skills and improve myself.

The preposition 'in the school' is less natural than 'at school' when referring to attending school as a place.

× Yes I would because we may go to the new school and have trained many things change the academic, change their myself train the hobbies, training anything in in my.

✓ Yes, I would because we may go to a new school and receive training in many things, change the academics, develop myself, train in hobbies, and receive training in various areas.

The original sentence has multiple pluralization issues: 'trained many things' should be 'receive training in many things'; 'change the academic' should be 'change the academics'; 'train the hobbies' should be 'train in hobbies'. Also, 'their myself' is incorrect and replaced with 'develop myself'.

× Yes I would because we may go to the new school and have trained many things change the academic, change their myself train the hobbies, training anything in in my.

✓ Yes, I would because we may go to a new school and receive training in many things, change the academics, develop myself, train in hobbies, and receive training in various areas.

The sentence is fragmented and lacks clear structure. It is corrected to a coherent sentence with proper conjunctions and parallel structure.

× In the future, I have many study plans, I want to have oils and I want to have become a doctor. But.

✓ In the future, I have many study plans. I want to become a doctor.

The phrase 'I want to have oils' is unclear and likely incorrect; it is removed. 'I want to have become a doctor' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I want to become a doctor'. The sentence fragment 'But.' is incomplete and removed.