学习— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you work or are you a student?
考生
I'm currently a student majoring in Chinese painting at Shanghai University.
考官
Where do you study?
考生
I always study at the library in the university because, you know, it gives me a sense that everyone is working hard so that I will follow the trend. But if I study alone, I don't have such motivation.
考官
Is it a good place to study?
考生
Yes, I think it's a good place to study because the environment is extremely quiet and everyone can concentrate on their own task. Besides, seeing the people around me working hard will motivate me to do so.
考官
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
考生
Yes, I want the library to expand its size because there are so many people crowded in this small place so that you can't even find a seat if you don't reserve it earlier or you come earlier.
考官
What are your future study plans?
考生
I'm not clear because I'm not such a person that like plan everything in advance. I'm just. A casual person so it's not clear for me.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you work or are you a student?
分數: 85.0建議: 回答简洁明了，但可以稍微丰富内容，增加一些细节描述，比如为什么选择中国画专业。
範例: I'm currently a student majoring in Chinese painting at Shanghai University because I have a deep passion for traditional art and want to preserve this cultural heritage.
Where do you study?
分數: 80.0建議: 回答较自然，但口语中“you know”略显口语化且重复，建议使用更正式的表达，并且可以用连接词使句子更连贯。
範例: I usually study at the university library because seeing others work hard motivates me to do the same, whereas studying alone makes it harder to stay focused.
Is it a good place to study?
分數: 90.0建議: 回答结构清晰，内容具体，建议在连接词使用上稍作改进，使表达更流畅。
範例: Yes, I think it's a good place to study because the environment is extremely quiet, which helps me concentrate. Moreover, seeing others working hard motivates me to stay focused.
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
分數: 85.0建議: 回答内容具体，但句子结构稍显复杂，建议简化表达并使用连接词使逻辑更清晰。
範例: Yes, I would like the library to be bigger because it is often crowded. As a result, it's hard to find a seat unless you arrive early or make a reservation.
What are your future study plans?
分數: 70.0建議: 回答不够连贯，语法和表达有误，建议使用完整句子并清晰表达观点。
範例: I'm not sure about my future study plans because I prefer to take things as they come rather than planning everything in advance.
文法
× I'm not such a person that like plan everything in advance.
✓ I'm not such a person that likes to plan everything in advance.
这里的主语是单数的"person"，谓语动词"like"需要加第三人称单数的-s，且"plan"前应加不定式to，构成"likes to plan"。错误在于动词形式不正确，导致主谓不一致。建议记住第三人称单数动词加-s的规则，并注意动词搭配。
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