学习— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. For example, "My job include" should be "My job includes," and "making, setting meetings" is unclear and redundant. Try to be more precise and avoid repeating words like "all the all the." Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: Currently, I work full-time as an office administrator. My responsibilities include invoicing, scheduling meetings, and managing company documents efficiently.

建議: Your answer is good but could be improved by using more natural phrasing and linking words. For example, instead of "with flying colors," you could say "with excellent grades." Also, connect your ideas to make the answer flow better.

範例: I studied at Langara College, where I completed my Health Science degree with excellent grades. I believe this qualification will help me secure a good job in the health sector, which I am really looking forward to.

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but watch for small errors like "there are plethora" which should be "there is a plethora" or "there are plenty." Also, use linking words to improve coherence, and avoid ending with "So I would say" which is informal.

範例: Yes, Langara College is one of the best colleges in Vancouver. It has a large number of international students and offers a wide range of courses with flexible schedules. Overall, I think it is an excellent place to study.

建議: Your answer is somewhat hesitant and contains filler words like "Umm" and "like" which reduce fluency. Try to be more confident and concise. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repetition.

範例: I think the college is already in good condition. However, if I had to suggest improvements, I would recommend enhancing Wi-Fi availability and expanding the cafeteria to accommodate the large number of students.

建議: Your answer communicates your plans but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For example, "interested to become" should be "interested in becoming," and "go for study in medicine or surgery" should be "study medicine or surgery." Also, avoid incomplete sentences like "it's a great."

範例: I have always been interested in becoming a doctor, so I plan to study medicine or surgery to increase my chances in the health sector. I am really looking forward to this opportunity.

× My job include invoicing, making, setting meetings and handling all the all the company documents.

✓ My job includes invoicing, making, setting meetings and handling all the company documents.

The subject 'job' is singular, so the verb should be 'includes' to agree in number. Also, 'all the all the' is a repetition error corrected to 'all the'.

× There are plethora of international students in it.

✓ There is a plethora of international students in it.

'Plethora' is a singular noun, so the verb should be 'is' and it requires the article 'a' before it.

× I have always been interested to become a doctor, so I would definitely go for study in medicine or surgery to secure chance in the health sector.

✓ I have always been interested in becoming a doctor, so I would definitely go to study medicine or surgery to secure a chance in the health sector.

'Interested' is followed by the preposition 'in' and the gerund form 'becoming'. Also, 'go for study' is incorrect; it should be 'go to study'. 'Secure chance' needs the article 'a' before 'chance'.

× I have always been interested to become a doctor, so I would definitely go for study in medicine or surgery to secure chance in the health sector.

✓ I have always been interested in becoming a doctor, so I would definitely go to study medicine or surgery to secure a chance in the health sector.

After 'interested', the verb should be in the gerund form 'becoming' rather than the infinitive 'to become'.

× It offers a wide range of courses and flexibility in schedule.

✓ It offers a wide range of courses and flexibility in schedules.

'Schedule' should be plural 'schedules' to match the context of multiple courses and their timings.