学习— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Apnar uttor e kichu grammar error ache, ar kichu sentence structure improve kora dorkar. Apni direct question er uttor diyechen, kintu kichu sentence e clarity kom ache. Apni 'aisles' bolsen, jeta 'IELTS' hote pare. Apnar uttor e spelling o pronunciation er dike khayal rakhun. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo sohoje ar shothik vabe bolte.

範例: I am a student. I recently graduated from Port City International University in Chittagong. Now, I am planning to pursue higher education in an Australian university, so I am preparing for the IELTS exam.

建議: Apnar uttor e kichu repetition ache, ar kichu sentence structure e improvement dorkar. Apni linking words use kore uttor ke aro logical korte paren. Apnar vocabulary bhalo, kintu kichu phrase aro natural korte hobe. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke shothik vabe connect korte.

範例: I study at Port City International University, which is a well-known private English medium university in Chittagong. It offers quality education, so I would recommend others to consider enrolling there.

建議: Apnar uttor e kichu grammar error ache, ar kichu sentence structure e confusion ache. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo shothik vabe complete korte. Apni specific example diye uttor ke aro bhalo korte paren. Linking words use korle uttor aro coherent hobe.

範例: Yes, it is a good place to study because it offers affordable education and helps students develop various skills. For example, there are clubs like the Leo English Club that provide extra activities and learning opportunities.

建議: Apnar uttor bhalo, specific example o ache. Kintu kichu choto grammar error ache, ar kichu sentence aro natural korte paren. Apni chesta korun linking words aro smoothly use korte, ar kichu vocabulary aro boro korte.

範例: Yes, I would like some changes in my university, especially improving the study environment. For instance, creating more quiet zones and comfortable seating would help students concentrate better. Moreover, upgrading technology like faster Wi-Fi and modern computers would greatly enhance the learning experience.

建議: Apnar uttor e grammar o sentence structure khub confused. Apni chesta korun clear ar shothik sentence banate. Apni direct question er uttor din, ar supporting details diye uttor ke boro korun. Apni chesta korun simple ar clear English use korte.

範例: My future study plan is to complete my higher education at an Australian university. I am very excited because it will give me the opportunity to study with international students and gain valuable experience.

× Recently I completed my graduation in Port City International University in Chittagong.

✓ Recently I completed my graduation from Port City International University in Chittagong.

In English, we use 'graduate from' a university, not 'graduate in'. So, the correct preposition here is 'from'.

× Now I will choose in Australia University for my higher education and that's why I am going to test for aisles.

✓ Now I will choose an Australian university for my higher education and that's why I am going to take the IELTS test.

We say 'choose a university' without 'in'. Also, 'Australia University' should be 'Australian university' as an adjective. 'Test for aisles' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'take the IELTS test'.

× I study in Post City International University that's a very good private university in Chittagong.

✓ I study at Port City International University, which is a very good private university in Chittagong.

The university's name is 'Port City', not 'Post City'. Also, 'study in' is less common than 'study at' for institutions. Added a comma and 'which' for clarity.

× In Chittagong it is a well known university and it's the English medium university and I suggest everyone feel free to admit the university.

✓ In Chittagong, it is a well-known university and it's an English medium university. I suggest everyone feel free to enroll in the university.

Added commas for clarity. 'Well known' should be hyphenated as 'well-known' when used as an adjective. 'English medium university' needs an article 'an'. 'Admit the university' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'enroll in the university'.

× It's provided, it's provided many cheap rate for good education and it provide you how many skills and many other activities like Leo English club and etcetera.

✓ It provides many affordable options for good education and offers you various skills and many other activities like the Leo English Club, etc.

'It's provided' is incorrect; the correct verb form is 'it provides'. 'Cheap rate' should be 'affordable options'. 'Provide you how many skills' is incorrect; better to say 'offers you various skills'. Added 'the' before 'Leo English Club' and replaced 'and etcetera' with 'etc.'.

× Yes, I would like the place where I started to make some changes, particularly by improving the studying environment.

✓ Yes, I would like the place where I study to make some changes, particularly by improving the study environment.

'Where I started' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'where I study'. 'Studying environment' should be 'study environment' as a noun phrase.

× For example, adding more quiet zone and comfortable seating areas would help student concentrate better.

✓ For example, adding more quiet zones and comfortable seating areas would help students concentrate better.

'Quiet zone' should be plural 'quiet zones' to match 'more'. 'Student' should be plural 'students' because it refers to people in general.

× Additionally, upgrading the technology and resources available such as faster Wi-Fi and more modern computer would greatly enhance the learning experience.

✓ Additionally, upgrading the technology and resources available, such as faster Wi-Fi and more modern computers, would greatly enhance the learning experience.

'More modern computer' should be plural 'more modern computers' to match the plural 'resources'.

× My future study plans. I, I completed my higher education in Australian University Eastern very, very I am very excited for that at because I I gained international students opportunity and that's it.

✓ My future study plans are to complete my higher education at an Australian university in the east. I am very excited about this because I will have the opportunity to study with international students.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It needs to be restructured for clarity and correct grammar. 'Australian University Eastern' is unclear; assumed 'an Australian university in the east'. 'Gained international students opportunity' is incorrect; corrected to 'have the opportunity to study with international students'.