学习— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp trả lời câu hỏi, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể. Ngoài ra, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh.

範例: I am currently a high school student in my final year at Long High Town High School. I really enjoy studying, especially subjects like English and physics.

建議: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời tự nhiên và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy tránh lỗi lặp từ và nói rõ ràng về phương tiện đi lại. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên hoàn chỉnh và tránh bỏ dở câu.

範例: I study at Mindam High School, where I am in grade 12. The school is very close to my house, so I usually ride my bike and it takes about four or five minutes. I enjoy studying there because the teachers are very friendly.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và diễn đạt rõ ràng về môi trường học tập và giáo viên.

範例: Yes, I think it is a good place to study because the environment is quiet, the teachers are very qualified, and the students are friendly to each other.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ. Hãy trình bày ý kiến rõ ràng và cụ thể hơn về những thay đổi bạn muốn, đồng thời sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp.

範例: I haven't thought about it before, but now I think my school should improve its facilities. For example, some classrooms are quite small and lack enough materials, so the school should invest in better equipment.

建議: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu rõ ràng, mạch lạc hơn. Hãy trình bày kế hoạch tương lai một cách cụ thể và logic, đồng thời sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp với chủ đề.

範例: I plan to study at university and earn a degree. After that, I hope to become a pilot, which has been my dream job since I was a child. I believe this career will allow me to fulfill my passion for flying.

× Yes, I'm student.

✓ Yes, I'm a student.

In English, singular countable nouns require an article. 'Student' is a singular countable noun, so it needs the indefinite article 'a' before it.

× I'm currently studying in high school in Long High Town where my final year.

✓ I'm currently studying in high school in Long High Town, where I am in my final year.

The original sentence lacks a verb in the relative clause and proper punctuation. Adding 'I am' clarifies the meaning, and a comma before 'where' improves sentence structure.

× I'm currently studying in high school in Long High Town where my final year.

✓ I'm currently studying at a high school in Long High Town, where I am in my final year.

The preposition 'at' is more appropriate when referring to attending a school. Also, adding 'a' before 'high school' is necessary as it is a singular countable noun.

× I'm currently studying at Mindam High School which which is my final year grade 12.

✓ I'm currently studying at Mindam High School, which is my final year, grade 12.

A comma is needed before 'which' to introduce the non-restrictive clause. Also, 'which which' is a repetition error.

× it's only take me about four or five minutes or to work I to go by riding bikes.

✓ It only takes me about four or five minutes to get to school by riding a bike.

The verb 'take' must agree with the singular subject 'it' as 'takes'. The phrase 'to work I to go' is incorrect and should be rephrased to 'to get to school'. Also, 'riding bikes' should be singular 'riding a bike' for clarity.

× I really enjoy studying here because teachers very friendly and the.

✓ I really enjoy studying here because the teachers are very friendly.

The sentence is incomplete and missing the verb 'are' after 'teachers'. The phrase 'and the.' is incomplete and should be removed.

× Just to clarify that this may not high school is a better best place to study because the in the study environment bring to us the teachers is very quality quality fight and the students are very friendly each other.

✓ Just to clarify, this high school may not be the best place to study because the study environment is not ideal. However, the teachers are very qualified and the students are very friendly to each other.

The original sentence has multiple errors: missing articles ('this may not high school' should be 'this high school may not be'), incorrect adjective order ('better best' is incorrect), and unclear phrases ('quality quality fight'). The correction clarifies meaning and corrects grammar.

× some classroom are quite small and lack of material facilities, so they need to buy some buy.

✓ Some classrooms are quite small and lack material facilities, so they need to buy some.

'Classroom' should be plural 'classrooms' to agree with 'some'. 'Lack of' should be 'lack' when followed by a noun without 'of'. The phrase 'buy some buy' is incomplete and should be 'buy some materials' or similar.

× some classroom are quite small and lack of material facilities, so they need to buy some buy.

✓ Some classrooms are quite small and lack material facilities, so they need to buy some.

The noun 'classroom' should be plural 'classrooms' to agree with 'some'. Also, 'lack of' should be 'lack' when followed directly by a noun.

× Well, I'm planning to study at university and pursue the degree after that, I hope I can become a pilot which is my my dream job since I enjoy since I was a kid.

✓ Well, I'm planning to study at university and pursue a degree. After that, I hope I can become a pilot, which has been my dream job since I was a kid.

'Pursue the degree' should be 'pursue a degree' because it is not a specific degree. The sentence is long and run-on; splitting it improves clarity. 'My my' is a repetition error. 'Since I enjoy since I was a kid' is incorrect; it should be 'has been my dream job since I was a kid'.

× I believe that Carrie will allow me to fly in the sky.

✓ I believe that my career will allow me to fly in the sky.

'Carrie' is likely a misspelling of 'career'. Using the correct noun clarifies the meaning.