学习— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá đầy đủ nhưng có sự lặp lại từ 'currently' và câu hơi dài. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và giữ câu trả lời ngắn gọn, tự nhiên hơn.

範例: I'm a second-year student at the University of Engineering and Technology, part of Vietnam National University, majoring in Artificial Intelligence.

建議: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngắt quãng và câu không hoàn chỉnh, gây khó hiểu. Bạn nên nói rõ ràng, tránh ngắt quãng và dùng câu hoàn chỉnh để trả lời hiệu quả hơn.

範例: I study at the University of Engineering and Technology, a well-known university in Vietnam famous for its strong teaching tradition and producing many talented engineers.

建議: Câu trả lời thiếu sự mạch lạc và có lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và liên kết ý bằng từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

範例: It's a great place to study because of the high-quality teachers and a supportive environment. Also, the friendly peer atmosphere helps me focus on my studies.

建議: Bạn lặp từ 'infrastructure' và có lỗi ngữ pháp, câu không trôi chảy. Hãy tránh lặp từ và dùng câu hoàn chỉnh, rõ ràng hơn.

範例: Yes, I hope the university can invest more in infrastructure because some of the equipment is sometimes inadequate for students to learn and practice effectively.

建議: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt chưa chính xác. Bạn nên dùng cấu trúc câu đúng và rõ ràng hơn để thể hiện ý định tương lai.

範例: After graduation, I would like to pursue a PhD if I have the opportunity, although I know it will be a long journey.

× I'm currently studying at University of Engineering and Technology which is a College of Vietnam National University.

✓ I'm currently studying at the University of Engineering and Technology, which is a college of Vietnam National University.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'University of Engineering and Technology' because it is a specific institution. Also, 'College' should not be capitalized unless it is part of a proper noun. Articles help specify nouns and are important for clarity.

× My major is Artificial intelligence.

✓ My major is Artificial Intelligence.

'Artificial Intelligence' is a proper noun and should be capitalized. There is no plural issue here, but capitalization is important for proper nouns.

× Like I've said before, I'm studying at University of Engineering and Technology, which is a famous university in Vietnam that was. Well known for their tradition of teaching and producing many talents. Constructor.

✓ Like I've said before, I'm studying at the University of Engineering and Technology, which is a famous university in Vietnam, well known for its tradition of teaching and producing many talented constructors.

The original sentence is fragmented and incorrectly punctuated. 'That was. Well known' should be combined into 'well known'. 'Their' should be 'its' to agree with the singular noun 'university'. 'Talents. Constructor' is unclear; 'many talented constructors' is more appropriate.

× ...which is a famous university in Vietnam that was. Well known for their tradition of teaching...

✓ ...which is a famous university in Vietnam, well known for its tradition of teaching...

The pronoun 'their' is plural but refers to the singular noun 'university'. The correct pronoun is 'its' for singular possessive.

× What is a great place to study, not only because of the quality of the teachers and professors that are currently working, but also is because of the environment.

✓ It is a great place to study, not only because of the quality of the teachers and professors who are currently working, but also because of the environment.

The sentence lacks a subject; 'What is' is incorrect here. 'It is' correctly introduces the sentence. Also, 'that' is better replaced by 'who' when referring to people. The phrase 'but also is because' should be 'but also because' for parallel structure.

× What I mean is the peer pressure here is quite quiet. Quite a lot so that I can be.

✓ What I mean is the peer pressure here is quite quiet, quite a lot, so that I can be focused.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Quiet' should be 'quite' if intended to mean 'to a considerable extent'. The phrase 'so that I can be' is incomplete and needs an object or complement to make sense.

× Yes, I would like them to invest more in infrastructure, infrastructure.

✓ Yes, I would like them to invest more in infrastructure.

The word 'infrastructure' is repeated unnecessarily. Removing the repetition improves clarity.

× Since the equipment here is sometime in a quick adequate for students to learn and to practice.

✓ Since the equipment here is sometimes inadequate for students to learn and practice.

'Sometime in a quick adequate' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'sometimes inadequate'. Also, 'to practice' can be simplified to 'practice' for parallelism.

× I think after graduate I would like to take a PhD courses or continue on doctor on doctor if I have the chance.

✓ I think after graduating, I would like to take PhD courses or continue on to a doctorate if I have the chance.

'After graduate' should be 'after graduating' to use the gerund form after a preposition. 'A PhD courses' is incorrect; 'PhD courses' is plural without 'a'. 'Continue on doctor on doctor' is unclear; 'continue on to a doctorate' is correct.