学习— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 文法の誤りや発音の不明瞭さが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。より自然で効果的な回答にするために、文法を正しくし、明確なトピック文を使い、具体的な内容を簡潔に述べる練習をしましょう。

範例: I am currently studying Economics and plan to specialize in development economics in graduate school. I am particularly interested in how economic policies can improve people's lives in different countries.

建議: 回答が不完全で文法的に誤りがあります。質問に直接答え、文を完結にし、必要に応じて詳細を加える練習をしましょう。

範例: I currently study solely online, but I used to attend university in person.

建議: 文法と語彙の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。理由を述べる際は、接続詞を使い、明確で具体的な説明を心がけましょう。

範例: Yes, I think it is a good place to study because my teachers explain things using simple words and provide clear examples.

建議: 回答が断片的で文法的に不正確です。否定の理由を明確に述べ、具体的な施設の名前を正しく使い、文をつなげる練習をしましょう。

範例: No, I don't want any changes because I am satisfied with the facilities, such as the library and self-study rooms.

建議: 回答が繰り返しや不自然な表現を含んでいます。簡潔で明確なトピック文を使い、将来の計画を具体的に述べる練習をしましょう。

範例: I plan to focus on development economics when I attend graduate school in the future.

× I'm currently studying Economix and planning to focus on development economics in Graduate School.

✓ I'm currently studying Economics and planning to focus on development economics in Graduate School.

The word 'Economix' is a misspelling of 'Economics'. Correct spelling is necessary for clarity and correctness.

× Is a fair that's looks at issue in European countries?

✓ It is a field that looks at issues in European countries.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. The correction provides a proper subject and verb structure to convey the intended meaning.

× I'm interestingly how economics.

✓ I'm interested in how economics works.

'Interestingly' is an adverb and incorrectly used here. The correct adjective is 'interested', and the sentence needs a preposition 'in' and a verb to complete the thought.

× In the year can be used to improve people lives.

✓ It can be used to improve people's lives.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. The correction provides a clear subject and verb, and uses the possessive form 'people's' correctly.

× I currently solely by online but I used to study university.

✓ I currently study solely online but I used to study at university.

The phrase 'by online' is incorrect; 'study online' is correct. Also, 'study university' should be 'study at university' to use the correct preposition.

× Yes, I think it is good press it to study it is because my teacher.

✓ Yes, I think it is a good place to study because my teacher

The phrase 'good press it to study it is' is incorrect and unclear. The correction clarifies the intended meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× Explain it using simple word and create clear example.

✓ explains it using simple words and creates clear examples.

The original sentence lacks a subject and has singular/plural errors. The correction adds the subject 'my teacher' implied from context and corrects plural forms.

× No, I don't because I'm still accountable to stay.

✓ No, I don't because I'm still able to stay.

'Accountable' is incorrectly used here; the correct word is 'able' to express capability.

× Because there are many. A good facilities. Like library and. Learning self bloom.

✓ Because there are many good facilities like the library and self-learning rooms.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. The correction combines them into a coherent sentence and corrects vocabulary and article usage.

× I would like to study. Focus on focusing on development economics in Graduate School.

✓ I would like to focus on development economics in Graduate School.

The phrase 'Focus on focusing on' is redundant. The correction removes redundancy and clarifies the intention.