学习— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear and direct response with correct grammar. Avoid redundancy and make your intentions clear.

範例: I am a student. I have completed my 12th grade and now I am planning to go abroad for my further studies. I intend to complete my graduation there.

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific details. Also, correct grammar and sentence structure are important.

範例: I study at home because my mother is a professor at Punjab University. Since she takes care of my younger siblings, I prefer studying independently at home.

建議: Your answer is confusing and contains many errors. Try to describe your study place clearly, use linking words, and avoid repetition. Provide specific details about why it is good for studying.

範例: Yes, it is a good place to study. My room is well decorated and has a positive atmosphere. Moreover, it has a beautiful view of trees, which helps me concentrate better.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains irrelevant information. Focus on whether you want to make changes and explain clearly with proper grammar and linking words.

範例: I am satisfied with my study place because it is well organized and quiet. Therefore, I do not want to make any changes.

建議: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Express your future plans clearly and use correct vocabulary. Avoid redundancy and ensure coherence.

範例: My future study plan is to go abroad for higher studies. I want to complete my graduation at Oxford University, which has been my dream since childhood.

× I sent Lee complete my 12th class.

✓ I have completed my 12th class.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'sent Lee complete' which is not proper past tense. The correct form is 'have completed' to indicate the completion of the 12th class in the past with relevance to the present.

× Now I am planning to go abroad for my father studies.

✓ Now I am planning to go abroad for my further studies.

The phrase 'for my father studies' is incorrect. It should be 'for my further studies' or 'for my higher studies' to indicate the purpose of going abroad.

× And I will do study for my tell my graduation.

✓ And I will study to complete my graduation.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. The corrected sentence uses proper verb forms and structure to express the intended meaning.

× I study at home because my mother is professor. In Punjab University.

✓ I study at home because my mother is a professor at Punjab University.

The sentence lacks the article 'a' before 'professor' and incorrectly separates the location. The correction combines them properly with correct prepositions and articles.

× So I'm independent person.

✓ So I'm an independent person.

The sentence misses the article 'an' before 'independent person'. This is necessary for correct grammar.

× And my mother all taking the care of my old card mix.

✓ And my mother is taking care of my old card mix.

The phrase 'all taking the care' is incorrect. The correct form is 'is taking care' to indicate ongoing action.

× It is God place where I started yesterday.

✓ It is a good place where I started yesterday.

'God place' is a typo or incorrect word choice. It should be 'a good place'. Also, the article 'a' is necessary before 'good place'.

× I usually study at around my room and my room and there are well decorated and there give a positive vibe and it also have a victor Nitti room view of trees so we can easily concentrate on other studies.

✓ I usually study in my room, which is well decorated and gives a positive vibe. It also has a beautiful view of trees, so I can easily concentrate on my studies.

The original sentence has multiple errors including incorrect prepositions ('at around'), repetition, subject-verb agreement, and unclear phrases. The correction addresses these issues for clarity and correctness.

× Now it is God.

✓ Now it is good.

'God' is a typo; the correct word is 'good' to describe the place.

× It is A good roommate is also well organized so you can easily concentrate on studies and no one can lose your distractions.

✓ It is a good room; it is also well organized so you can easily concentrate on studies and no one can cause distractions.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'roommate' instead of 'room' and has awkward phrasing. The correction clarifies the meaning and fixes article usage.

× An ice breaker usually study and that room.

✓ I usually study in that room without distractions.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. The correction provides a clear and grammatically correct sentence.

× My future study plan is I want to go abroad for my father studies and then I will complete my graduation in Oxford University.

✓ My future study plan is that I want to go abroad for my further studies and then I will complete my graduation at Oxford University.

The phrase 'for my father studies' is incorrect; it should be 'for my further studies'. Also, the preposition 'at' is used with universities. The modal verb 'will' is correctly used here.

× Every dream trans my childhood, so I will easily complete my drawing.

✓ It has been my dream since childhood, so I will complete my graduation easily.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. The correction clarifies the intended meaning with proper sentence structure and vocabulary.