学习— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa không được truyền đạt hiệu quả. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách mạch lạc hơn.

範例: I am currently working as a marketing content creator in a small company. My main responsibility is to develop content that helps promote our products and engage customers effectively.

建議: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng, từ vựng phù hợp và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời rõ ràng và hấp dẫn hơn.

範例: I studied at a large university in Vietnam, majoring in marketing. I found it very interesting because it covers many aspects of business and consumer behavior. The university also offers a great academic environment and has many international students.

建議: Câu trả lời thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và bổ sung các chi tiết cụ thể về cơ sở vật chất hoặc môi trường học tập để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

範例: Yes, it is a great place to study because the school offers modern facilities and a comfortable environment. I especially enjoyed the marketing courses, which helped me discover my passion in this field.

建議: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, diễn đạt ý tưởng rõ ràng và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để trả lời hiệu quả hơn.

範例: Yes, I would like the school to organize more extracurricular activities for students. These activities would help students connect with each other and develop new skills outside the classroom.

建議: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng tốt nhưng bị lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng, từ vựng phù hợp và diễn đạt ý tưởng rõ ràng hơn.

範例: I plan to study abroad in the future because I believe that being in a foreign environment will help me improve my language skills and gain a broader perspective. Studying in another country will also give me the opportunity to experience different cultures and meet many new people, which I think is very valuable for personal growth.

× I mainly focused on developing content.

✓ I mainly focus on developing content.

The sentence is about the current job, so the present tense 'focus' should be used instead of the past tense 'focused'. This is an issue of verb tense, but specifically the present tense is required here (Grammar Problem Type 6).

× I will I write to help promote our information exchanging best rewarding job.

✓ I write to help promote our information exchange; it is a rewarding job.

The original sentence is unclear and contains grammatical errors. 'Information exchanging' should be 'information exchange' as a noun phrase. Also, 'I will I write' is incorrect; it should be 'I write'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Is a university.

✓ It is a university.

The sentence lacks a subject. 'Is a university' is incomplete; it needs the subject 'It' to be grammatically correct.

× My major's worst marketing, which I thought was very interesting because it's cover many aspects of business and consumer behavior.

✓ My major was marketing, which I thought was very interesting because it covers many aspects of business and consumer behavior.

'Worst' is incorrect here; it should be 'was'. Also, 'it's cover' should be 'it covers' to agree with the singular subject. The verb tense is past because the study is in the past.

× The university has a great academic environments and many international.

✓ The university has a great academic environment and many international students.

'Environments' should be singular 'environment' because 'academic environment' is usually uncountable. Also, 'many international' is incomplete; it should be 'many international students' or 'many international programs'.

× Yes, absolutely it is a great place for me to study an discover my favorite and measures is marketing because the school is offers modern facilities and comfortable environment very keen on. Marketing Curse.

✓ Yes, absolutely it is a great place for me to study and discover my favorite subject, which is marketing, because the school offers modern facilities and a comfortable environment. I am very keen on the marketing course.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'an discover' should be 'and discover'; 'measures is marketing' should be 'my favorite subject, which is marketing'; 'is offers' should be 'offers'; 'comfortable environment' needs an article 'a'; 'Marketing Curse' should be 'marketing course'. The sentence is corrected for grammar and clarity.

× Well, actually I want. I want the scone missed the organized mall it sharp curriculars activities for students.

✓ Well, actually I want the school to organize more extracurricular activities for students.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect words: 'scone missed' should be 'school to'; 'mall it sharp curriculars' should be 'more extracurricular'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Because the is, we make them connect with each other and.

✓ Because these activities help students connect with each other.

The original sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. It is corrected to a complete sentence with clear meaning.

× Oh, I plan to study approach in their futures because I believe that being in a foreign environment will help me improve my language skills and get a broader purse perspective.

✓ Oh, I plan to study abroad in the future because I believe that being in a foreign environment will help me improve my language skills and gain a broader perspective.

'Study approach in their futures' is incorrect; it should be 'study abroad in the future'. 'Purse perspective' should be 'broader perspective'. The sentence is corrected for grammar and clarity.

× Studying in another country or so give me the opportunity to experience different cultures and many people, which I think is very valuable for my person.

✓ Studying in another country will give me the opportunity to experience different cultures and meet many people, which I think is very valuable for me personally.

'Or so give' should be 'will give'; 'many people' is fine but needs a verb 'meet'; 'my person' should be 'me personally'. The sentence is corrected for grammar and clarity.