学习— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng thì hiện tại đơn cho trạng thái hiện tại và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'for repaired'. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và thêm một câu giải thích ngắn gọn nếu cần.

範例: I am currently a high school student, and I am very busy preparing to go to university next year.

建議: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy tránh lỗi sai về danh từ số nhiều và giới từ. Sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp thông tin cụ thể hơn về trường học.

範例: I study at Hand Signal High School in College Park, District 5. It is a popular school because it has many parent-teacher activities and good facilities. I enjoy studying there especially because the environment is very friendly and supportive.

建議: Câu trả lời cần chính xác về ngữ pháp và từ vựng. Tránh lỗi sai về thì và số nhiều. Sử dụng các liên từ như 'moreover' đúng cách và đảm bảo câu có ý nghĩa rõ ràng, tự nhiên.

範例: Yes, it is a good place to study because it has excellent facilities such as air conditioning and modern classrooms. Moreover, the teachers are very friendly and supportive, which makes learning enjoyable.

建議: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, gây khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi sai về đại từ và thì. Hãy giải thích cụ thể về những thay đổi bạn muốn và lý do.

範例: Actually, yes. I would like the school to change the way exams are conducted because they are very difficult and stressful. For example, the current exams cover too much material in a short time, so I think it would be better if the exams were easier to help students perform better.

建議: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'pursue's' hay 'its parent to repair'. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu có cấu trúc đơn giản, mạch lạc.

範例: I haven't thought about it much before, but I believe I need to go to university next year because I want to pursue my dream job. It is important to gain more knowledge and prepare for my career.

× Now I am a student in high school and I was very busy for repaired to go to university.

✓ Now I am a student in high school and I was very busy preparing to go to university.

The verb 'repaired' is incorrect here; the correct form is the gerund 'preparing' to indicate the ongoing action in the past. 'Preparing' is the correct verb form to express getting ready for something.

× I study at a high school in College Park. Hand Signal, which is located in District 5 is a popular school because it's had many it's parent teacher in good facility.

✓ I study at a high school in College Park called Hand Signal, which is located in District 5. It is a popular school because it has many parent-teacher activities and good facilities.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear phrases like 'it's had many it's parent teacher in good facility.' The correction clarifies the sentence structure and corrects the possessive and plural forms for clarity.

× I very in charge studying there especially because the environment is very friendly and supportive.

✓ I really enjoy studying there especially because the environment is very friendly and supportive.

The phrase 'I very in charge studying there' is incorrect and unclear. The correction uses 'I really enjoy' to express the intended meaning clearly and grammatically.

× Yes Michael, my schooling is alright latest study because it had excellent facilities shut at air conditioning an modern classrooms.

✓ Yes Michael, my schooling is alright because it has excellent facilities such as air conditioning and modern classrooms.

The original sentence misuses 'alright latest study' and 'shut at air conditioning an modern classrooms.' The correction fixes adjective and noun usage and improves clarity.

× Moreover, the teacher are very friendly and supportive which make learning enjoyable.

✓ Moreover, the teachers are very friendly and supportive which makes learning enjoyable.

The subject 'teacher' should be plural 'teachers' to agree with the plural verb 'are.' Also, 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'which' referring to 'learning.'

× Actually, yes, I would like my's going to make some changes to the voice exams are conducted because they are very difficult and stressful for students.

✓ Actually, yes, I would like my school to make some changes to the way exams are conducted because they are very difficult and stressful for students.

The phrase 'my's going to make' is incorrect. It should be 'my school to make.' Also, 'voice exams' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'the way exams.' The correction clarifies the intended meaning.

× For example, the current US covered too much material in a sometime, so I think it would be better if they see them were easier Annemasse Brickell to help students perform better.

✓ For example, the current exams cover too much material in a short time, so I think it would be better if they were easier and more manageable to help students perform better.

The original sentence is confusing and contains nonsensical phrases like 'US covered,' 'sometime,' and 'Annemasse Brickell.' The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects grammar and vocabulary.

× This is a hard question, I never thought this before, but I believe that I need to go to university next year because I want to pursue's my dream job soon I will be 18 years or at Hank.

✓ This is a hard question, I have never thought about this before, but I believe that I need to go to university next year because I want to pursue my dream job. Soon I will be 18 years old.

The original sentence has tense errors and incorrect verb forms like 'pursue's' and unclear phrases like 'or at Hank.' The correction fixes tense, verb form, and clarity.

× Is is important to gain more knowledge and its parent to repair for my career.

✓ It is important to gain more knowledge and prepare for my career.

The phrase 'its parent to repair' is incorrect and unclear. The correction uses 'prepare' which fits the context and corrects pronoun usage.