学习— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Please respond directly and clearly, for example, say "I am a student studying in 12th grade." Avoid unnecessary or incorrect words.

範例: I am a student currently studying in the 12th grade.

建議: Your answer is confusing and grammatically incorrect. Please give a clear and direct answer with proper sentence structure. For example, "I study at Good Day Weather Educational Academy, which is located in my local area, Banda."

範例: I study at Good Day Weather Educational Academy, which is located in my local area, Banda.

建議: Your answer is repetitive and contains an unclear phrase "he's a very good place." Please avoid redundancy and use clear sentences. For example, "Yes, it is a good place to study because it is an English medium school with supportive teachers."

範例: Yes, it is a good place to study because it is an English medium school with supportive teachers.

建議: Your answer has grammatical errors and could be more natural. Use linking words to improve coherence. For example, "I would not like to make any changes because it is a very good place and is close to my home."

範例: I would not like to make any changes because it is a very good place and is close to my home.

建議: Your answer is fragmented and unclear. Please provide a complete and coherent sentence. For example, "My father plans for me to go abroad for higher studies."

範例: My father plans for me to go abroad for higher studies.

× I'm a student. 12th class gender.

✓ I'm a student in 12th grade.

The phrase '12th class gender' is incorrect and unclear. The correct expression is '12th grade' or '12th class' to indicate the level of study. 'Gender' is unrelated here and should be omitted.

× I'm sitting in my local area.

✓ I study in my local area.

The phrase 'I'm sitting in my local area' is incorrect in this context. The student means to say where they study, so 'I study in my local area' is appropriate.

× From Banda school name is Good Day Weather Educational Academy.

✓ The name of my school in Banda is Good Day Weather Educational Academy.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. The corrected sentence properly introduces the school name and location.

× My school is English medium and he's a very good place.

✓ My school is English medium and it is a very good place.

The pronoun 'he' is incorrectly used to refer to 'school', which is an object and should be referred to as 'it'.

× I think I would not to make any changes where I study becauses it is a very good place and near my home.

✓ I think I would not make any changes to the place where I study because it is a very good place and near my home.

The modal verb 'would' should be followed by the base form of the verb without 'to'. Also, 'becauses' is a spelling error and should be 'because'. The phrase 'to make any changes where I study' needs 'to' before 'the place' for clarity.

× My father plan is.

✓ My father's plan is.

The phrase lacks possessive form. 'My father plan' should be 'My father's plan' to indicate possession.

× I will go abroad for my higher for other studies.

✓ I will go abroad for my higher studies.

The phrase 'for my higher for other studies' is redundant and unclear. 'Higher studies' is sufficient and correct. The future tense 'will go' is correctly used.