学习— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Améliorez la clarté et la précision de votre réponse. Par exemple, évitez les erreurs de nom propre et expliquez clairement pourquoi vous aimez votre majeure. Utilisez des phrases complètes et évitez les répétitions inutiles.

範例: I'm a sophomore student at the University of Economics. I really enjoy my major because it helps me understand global economic trends and how the world works.

建議: Travaillez sur la fluidité et la cohérence de vos phrases. Évitez les erreurs grammaticales et les phrases incomplètes. Clarifiez vos idées en utilisant des mots de liaison pour rendre votre discours plus naturel.

範例: I'm studying in France because I want to step out of my comfort zone and become more independent. I also enjoy solitude, so studying abroad gives me a great opportunity to grow personally.

建議: Améliorez la structure de votre réponse en utilisant des phrases complètes et des mots de liaison. Soyez plus précis dans vos explications et évitez les erreurs de vocabulaire.

範例: I think it's a good place to study because my university has a high ranking in economics. This reputation will help me become more qualified and improve my chances of finding a good job in the future.

建議: Améliorez la fluidité et la précision de votre réponse. Utilisez des phrases complètes et évitez les répétitions. Soyez clair sur ce que vous souhaitez changer et pourquoi.

範例: If I had the chance to speak with the university, I would suggest organizing more workshops to help students find jobs and internships.

建議: Travaillez sur la clarté et la cohérence de vos phrases. Évitez les phrases incomplètes et les erreurs de vocabulaire. Expliquez clairement vos plans d'études futurs avec des phrases complètes.

範例: I am currently a sophomore and plan to graduate next year. After that, I intend to pursue a master's degree in data science within the next two years.

× I'm studying in France. I'm studying abroad because I like to get out of my comfort zone an being more independent.

✓ I'm studying in France. I'm studying abroad because I like to get out of my comfort zone and be more independent.

The phrase 'an being' is incorrect; after 'and' we should use the base form of the verb 'be' instead of 'being' because it follows 'like to get out of my comfort zone and...'. This is a coordination of two infinitive phrases, so 'be' is correct.

× Studying abroad, it's really a chance for me to be more major.

✓ Studying abroad, it's really a chance for me to be more mature.

The word 'major' is incorrectly used as an adjective here. The intended meaning is likely 'mature' or 'grown-up'. 'Major' is a noun or adjective related to importance or age group, but not suitable here.

× Firstly is because of the ranking in economix of my university, it's really high, so it helps me to be more.

✓ Firstly, it's because of the ranking in economics of my university; it's really high, so it helps me to improve.

The original sentence lacks proper subject and verb structure at the beginning and has unclear ending. Adding 'it's' clarifies the subject, correcting 'economix' to 'economics' fixes spelling, and completing the sentence with 'improve' makes it meaningful.

× If I have any chance to talk to the talk to my university, I would like to.

✓ If I have any chance to talk to my university, I would like to.

The phrase 'talk to the talk to my university' is redundant and incorrect. Removing the repeated phrase 'the talk to' corrects the prepositional phrase.

× As a sophomore, I will graduate next year an.

✓ As a sophomore, I will graduate next year.

The word 'an' at the end is unnecessary and incorrect here. It should be removed to correct the sentence.

× Next year I should. Also find my master to pursue in the next two years.

✓ Next year I should also find a master's program to pursue in the next two years.

The sentence is fragmented and lacks clarity. 'Should' needs an object or complement. Adding 'also find a master's program' completes the modal verb usage properly.

× I like to pursue the data. And Alice.

✓ I like to pursue data and AI.

The phrase 'the data' is awkward here; 'data' is uncountable and usually used without 'the' in this context. 'Alice' seems to be a mishearing or typo for 'AI' (Artificial Intelligence). Correcting to 'data and AI' makes sense.