学习— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can improve by making it more concise and natural. Avoid starting with 'Well' and try to use a complete sentence with a linking phrase to sound more fluent.

範例: I am currently studying for a Pharmacy Technician diploma at Sheridan College.

建議: Your answer provides good details but can be improved by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly and correcting minor grammar errors. Also, avoid starting sentences with 'And'.

範例: I usually study in my room, where there is a small table and chair placed in the right corner. This is where I write my notes and prepare for my examinations because it offers a peaceful environment.

建議: Your answer is relevant and structured, but you should avoid unnecessary pauses and minor errors like the misplaced period. Also, try to use more varied vocabulary and linking phrases for coherence.

範例: Yes, definitely. I think it is the best place for me to study because the environment is peaceful and free from distractions. Therefore, I can focus easily and learn more effectively.

建議: Your answer is somewhat fragmented and has grammatical errors. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to express your ideas clearly and naturally.

範例: At the moment, I don't think I need to change anything in my room. However, I would like to have a bigger table and a small lamp on it to provide more light for studying at night.

建議: Your answer is informative but can be improved by avoiding filler phrases like 'Well' and 'So that's how I'm learning.' Use linking words to make your response more coherent and concise.

範例: Currently, I am preparing for the Pharmacy Technician qualifying examination in Canada. I plan to spend a few months reviewing all the course materials and studying for the jurisprudence examination in Ontario.

× There is a small table and chair pleased at right corner of my room and this is where I write my notes and prepare for my examinations.

✓ There is a small table and chair placed in the right corner of my room and this is where I write my notes and prepare for my examinations.

The preposition 'at' is incorrectly used here; the correct preposition to indicate location inside a room is 'in'. Also, 'pleased' is a wrong word; the correct past participle of 'place' is 'placed'. So, the phrase should be 'placed in the right corner'. This correction improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Well, for now, I don't think. To change anything in my room honestly speaking, but definitely I would love to bring a big table and a small lamp.

✓ Well, for now, I don't think I want to change anything in my room, honestly speaking, but definitely I would love to bring a big table and a small lamp.

The original sentence is fragmented and incorrectly structured. The phrase 'I don't think. To change anything' is incomplete and awkward. Combining these parts into a single coherent sentence improves readability and grammatical correctness.