学习— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly and clearly, for example, say "I am a university student majoring in liberal arts, which includes subjects like politics, history, and sociology." Avoid unnecessary words like "mysterious" which confuse the meaning.

範例: I am a university student majoring in liberal arts, which includes subjects such as politics, history, and sociology.

建議: Your answer is fragmented and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to form complete sentences and clarify your meaning. For example, say "I study at a university in Guangzhou, which is close to my hometown Shenzhen. It takes about a certain number of minutes by train, so I can visit home occasionally."

範例: I study at a university in Guangzhou, which is close to my hometown Shenzhen. It takes about 30 minutes by train, so I can visit home occasionally.

建議: Your answer is relevant but a bit long and slightly awkward. Try to use linking words and clearer phrasing. For example, "Yes, it is a good place to study, especially for humanities students. The university has a rich historical atmosphere and extensive resources in the libraries, which provide great opportunities for learning."

範例: Yes, it is a good place to study, especially for humanities students. The university has a rich historical atmosphere and extensive resources in the libraries, which provide great opportunities for learning.

建議: Your answer has unclear phrases and grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas clearly and logically. For example, "Yes, I would like some changes, especially regarding the living environment. Since the campus is old and historical, some facilities and furniture are outdated and not very functional."

範例: Yes, I would like some changes, especially regarding the living environment. Since the campus is old and historical, some facilities and furniture are outdated and not very functional.

建議: Your answer conveys your intentions but contains grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to say, "I am not completely sure about my future study plans, but I hope to pursue a master's degree in the UK to deepen my knowledge and broaden my perspective."

範例: I am not completely sure about my future study plans, but I hope to pursue a master's degree in the UK to deepen my knowledge and broaden my perspective.

× I am mysterious student at university majoring in liberal arts which contains many humanity subjects such as politics, history and sociology.

✓ I am a mysterious student at a university majoring in liberal arts, which contains many humanities subjects such as politics, history and sociology.

The sentence is missing the indefinite articles 'a' before 'mysterious student' and 'a' before 'university'. Also, 'humanity subjects' should be 'humanities subjects' as the correct term for academic disciplines. Articles are necessary to specify singular countable nouns, and correct noun forms are important for clarity.

× I am study in a university in Guangzhou, close to my city, my hometown Shenzhen.

✓ I study at a university in Guangzhou, close to my city, my hometown Shenzhen.

The phrase 'I am study' is incorrect; the correct present simple tense is 'I study'. Also, the preposition 'at' is more appropriate for institutions like universities. Present simple tense is used to describe habitual actions or facts.

× Which is about. Certain minutes of training so it is not that far away and due to that I occasionally return to my CD to have some.

✓ It is about a certain number of minutes by train, so it is not that far away, and due to that, I occasionally return to my city to visit.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Which is about. Certain minutes of training' is incomplete and incorrectly punctuated. 'CD' seems to be a typo for 'city'. The sentence has been restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Generally, yes. Particularly for students like me who study humanities subjects, it indeed of a great historical atmosphere as well as a large variety of resources in the school libraries and other places which can offer great opportunity for students who study these subjects.

✓ Generally, yes. Particularly for students like me who study humanities subjects, it indeed has a great historical atmosphere as well as a large variety of resources in the school libraries and other places which can offer great opportunities for students who study these subjects.

The phrase 'it indeed of a great historical atmosphere' is incorrect; it should be 'it indeed has a great historical atmosphere'. Also, 'great opportunity' should be plural 'great opportunities' to match the plural 'resources'. Articles and verb forms are corrected for grammatical accuracy.

× Absolutely yes, especially in terms of the living environment. That is the dumbest tree that will leave in our daily lives.

✓ Absolutely yes, especially in terms of the living environment. That is the dumbest thing that we will live with in our daily lives.

The phrase 'dumbest tree' is likely a mishearing or typo; 'thing' fits the context better. 'Will leave' should be 'will live with' to make sense. Pronouns and word choice are corrected for clarity and meaning.

× As the school is quite an ancient and historical campus, so the facilities and the furniture are a little bit too old for us to use and sometime it's often more functions which is not so useful.

✓ As the school is quite an ancient and historical campus, the facilities and the furniture are a little bit too old for us to use, and sometimes it has functions which are not very useful.

The conjunction 'so' is redundant after 'as' and has been removed. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'It's often more functions' is unclear and corrected to 'it has functions which are not very useful'. Conjunctions and adverb usage are corrected for grammatical accuracy.

× Well. I am pretty not sure about my future plans for studies, but I am expecting myself to go to the university in the UK for my master degree in order to depend my knowledge as well as broaden my perspective from a brand new point of view.

✓ Well, I am not quite sure about my future study plans, but I expect to go to a university in the UK for my master's degree in order to deepen my knowledge as well as broaden my perspective from a brand new point of view.

'I am pretty not sure' is awkward; 'I am not quite sure' is more natural. 'Expecting myself to go' is incorrect; 'I expect to go' is correct. 'Master degree' should be 'master's degree'. 'Depend my knowledge' is incorrect; it should be 'deepen my knowledge'. Modal verb and verb usage are corrected for natural and correct expression.