视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant and shows enthusiasm, but it is slightly repetitive and has some grammatical errors. To improve, make a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, correct grammar (e.g., verb forms and articles), and add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Keep it concise (no more than 4–5 sentences).

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, when I visit a new city I often photograph the skyline and local parks because the light and architecture are unique. In addition, taking pictures helps me remember the places I’ve been.

建議: Your answer answers the question directly and gives a personal reason, which is good. Improve grammar (past tense and articles), make the supporting detail more specific, and use a linking word to connect ideas. Aim for one topic sentence plus one supporting sentence with a concrete example.

範例: I prefer rural views because I grew up in a county in northwest China. For instance, I enjoy walking by rivers and fields there since the quiet atmosphere helps me relax.

建議: You answered the question and expressed a balanced opinion, but hesitations and repetition reduce fluency. Improve by removing filler words (uh), fixing grammar (conditional forms and plurals), and organizing into a clear topic sentence plus a supporting reason with a specific example. Use linking words like 'however' or 'also'.

範例: I like the views in my own country, but I also want to see scenery abroad. For example, I would like to visit Japan to experience different landscapes and cultural sights, which would broaden my perspective.

× I like to take a lot of pictures when I visit a lot of different views.

✓ I like taking a lot of pictures when I visit many different places.

Use of verb + -ing (gerund) is more natural after 'like' for habitual actions; replace 'to take' with 'taking'. Also 'views' is awkward; use 'places' and 'a lot of' -> 'many' for conciseness.

× I think as a person who is interested in taking beautiful photos, travel to different cities to see different scenery is relaxing.

✓ I think that, as a person who is interested in taking beautiful photos, traveling to different cities to see different scenery is relaxing.

Missing 'that' to introduce a content clause and gerund form 'traveling' needed after the clause. Use comma after introductory phrase. Ensure parallel structure: 'traveling ... is relaxing.'

× I prefer the rural views because I grow up in a county in northwest of China and I feel relaxed to living in the natural.

✓ I prefer rural views because I grew up in a county in the northwest of China and I feel relaxed living in nature.

Use past tense 'grew up' for completed past action. Remove definite article before 'rural views'. Use 'the northwest' with 'of' removed before China. Use 'living in nature' (noun) and omit unnecessary 'to'.

× I prefer the rural views because I grow up in a county in northwest of China and I feel relaxed to living in the natural.

✓ I prefer rural views because I grew up in a county in the northwest of China and I feel relaxed living in nature.

Article errors: omit 'the' before 'rural views' and 'the natural' is incorrect; use 'nature' without article. Also 'in northwest of China' requires 'in the northwest of China.'

× If I have chance, I would like to travel around the world because I know, uh, there are still a lot of interesting and, uh, different culture and the scenery.

✓ If I have the chance, I would like to travel around the world because I know there are still a lot of interesting and different cultures and scenery.

Add definite article 'the' after 'have'. Use plural 'cultures' to match 'a lot of'. Remove filler 'uh' and unnecessary 'the' before 'scenery.' Keep conditional 'would like' appropriate for hypothetical desire.

× So if I have chance, I would do that first.

✓ So if I have the chance, I would do that first.

Add article 'the' after 'have' to form correct phrase 'have the chance.' The modal 'would' is appropriate for this hypothetical preference.