视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific reason and an example. Correct grammar (remove extra words, fix prepositions) and avoid repetition.

範例: Yes, I do. I often take photos in different places to capture memories, because seeing the pictures later helps me remember special moments. For example, I photographed a seaside sunrise last month, and the photo brings back the atmosphere and emotions of that morning.

建議: Give a direct answer first, then provide two clear, linked reasons with correct grammar. Use linking words (because, also) and finish the sentence. Be specific about what you like in rural areas and contrast briefly with city experience.

範例: I prefer rural views because they offer more natural scenery and a sense of peace. For example, I enjoy green fields and quiet trails that let me relax, whereas city views are often busy and noisy. Also, having lived in a city, I appreciate escaping to the countryside on weekends.

建議: Answer directly and correct grammar. Explain specifically how foreign views inspire you and give a concrete example. Use linking words (because, for example) and keep it within 1–3 concise sentences.

範例: I prefer views in other countries because they expose me to different landscapes and cultures that inspire my art. For example, I once visited a mountain village abroad whose colors and architecture helped me create a new painting series that was very different from my usual work.

× Yes I do, I always take pictures of in different location to make memories.

✓ Yes, I do. I always take pictures in different locations to make memories.

Original has extra 'of' and uses singular 'location' where plural 'locations' is appropriate. The structure 'take pictures in different locations' is correct. Suggest adding a comma after 'Yes' and separating into two sentences for clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 8.

× This makes me feel easier to have a lot of memories in the future.

✓ This makes it easier for me to have many memories in the future.

The phrase 'feel easier' is incorrect; we use 'make it easier for someone to do something.' Also 'a lot of memories' is informal; 'many memories' is better. Reordering and adding 'it' and 'for me' corrects sentence structure. Grammar problem type ID: 14.

× I think I'm more person who likes rural areas because I can see that a lot of nature and really choose impression of that so and also I I've lived in the city so I.

✓ I think I'm more of a person who likes rural areas because I can see a lot of nature and get a stronger impression; also, I have lived in the city.

Original is ungrammatical and fragmented. Need 'more of a person' and remove 'that' after 'see.' 'Really choose impression of that' is unclear; replaced with 'get a stronger impression.' 'I've lived in the city so I' is incomplete; change to 'I have lived in the city.' This fixes sentence structure and clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 26.

× Definitely, I like the views in other countries more because I can get a lot of inspiration from it.

✓ Definitely, I like the views in other countries more because I can get a lot of inspiration from them.

The pronoun 'it' does not agree in number with 'views' (plural). Use 'them' to match plural antecedent. This is a pronoun-number agreement related to present-tense statement. Grammar problem type ID: 6.

× For example, when I painting some photos I need something different compared to where I'm from.

✓ For example, when I am painting some photos, I need something different compared to where I'm from.

The verb 'painting' needs the auxiliary 'am' to form the present continuous 'am painting.' Adding commas improves readability. This corrects the verb form usage. Grammar problem type ID: 8