视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答要更直接并语法正确，减少犹豫语（如 "umm"）和重复；用一到两句说明原因并给出具体例子。保持句子不超过5句，使用连接词如 because 或 so 来增强连贯性。

範例: Yes, I used to be very into photography, but nowadays I rarely take pictures because I prefer to simply enjoy the scene. For example, when I visit a mountain or a park I usually take a short photo and then focus on observing the surroundings.

建議: 注意语法（如时态和被动/完成结构），避免口语填充词（如 "you know"），并提供更具体的细节或比较。使用连接词 like "because" 或 "so" 使理由更清晰。

範例: I prefer rural views because I grew up in a big city and skyscrapers feel ordinary to me. For instance, I enjoy walks in forests where I can smell flowers and hear birds, which helps me relax much more than city streets.

建議: 回答应更简洁且语法正确，去除犹豫和重复部分；清晰表达对两者的看法并给出具体例子或比较。使用连接词（e.g. "however", "also"）来组织句子。

範例: It depends. My country is large and has a wide variety of landscapes, so I can see mountains, beaches and deserts at home. However, I would also like to visit other countries to experience different cultures and landscapes, such as the fjords of Norway.

× I used to pretty much into photography, but now, umm, not that often anymore. I'll probably just enjoy the view and write about it afterwards.

✓ I used to be pretty much into photography, but now, umm, not that often anymore. I'll probably just enjoy the view and write about it afterwards.

错误类型：现在时/动词结构缺失。原句 ‘I used to pretty much into photography’ 中缺少系动词 be，正确结构为 ‘used to be + 形容词/介词短语’ 表示过去常常做某事或过去的状态。改正后句子时态与语境一致。建议：记住固定结构 ‘used to do/used to be’。

× Definitely rural areas, since I born in a big city, those tall skycrippers are just normal to me. So I'm more into nature environments such as, you know, those huge trees and flowers in the fresh air.

✓ Definitely rural areas, since I was born in a big city, those tall skyscrapers are just normal to me. So I'm more into natural environments, such as those huge trees and flowers in the fresh air.

错误类型：句子结构错误、过去时使用和拼写及形容词用法。1) ‘I born in a big city’ 缺少助动词was，正确为 ‘I was born’（被动含义的过去时）。2) ‘skycrippers’ 为拼写错误，应为 ‘skyscrapers’。3) ‘nature environments’ 用法不自然，改为形容词 + 名词 ‘natural environments’ 更恰当。建议：注意被动过去式结构 ‘was born’，检查拼写，并使用恰当的形容词修饰名词。

× Oh yeah, that really depends umm 'cause my country's is so big that it almost contains like all kinds of different geography views. But at the same times I do also really would love to VI visit other countries and see different.

✓ Oh yeah, that really depends, 'cause my country is so big that it almost contains all kinds of different geographical features. But at the same time I would really love to visit other countries and see different views.

错误类型：代词/所有格使用错误、句子结构及词类错误。1) ‘my country's is so big’ 中多余的所有格 ’s 不应出现，正确为 ‘my country is so big’。2) ‘geography views’ 词类搭配错误，应为名词短语 ‘geographical features’ 或 ‘geographical views’；更自然为 ‘geographical features’。3) ‘at the same times’ 复数错误，改为 ‘at the same time’。4) 动词短语顺序问题：‘I do also really would love to VI visit’ 太多模态/助动词混用，保留 ‘would really love to visit’ 即可。5) 句末 ‘see different’ 不完整，补为 ‘see different views’。建议：1) 删去多余的 ’s，2) 使用正确的名词搭配（geographical features），3) 使用固定短语 ‘at the same time’，4) 保持动词短语简洁，避免助动词混用，5) 补足宾语使句子完整。