视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Habla con más naturalidad y corrige errores básicos: no digas "I'm not a good photograph" porque "photograph" es el sustantivo. Usa "photographer" o una frase como "not very good at taking photos". Mantén la respuesta breve (1–2 oraciones) y añade una razón corta para enriquecerla.

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views, although I’m not very good at photography. I usually take photos just for memories, so I focus on capturing colours and interesting details.

建議: Organiza la respuesta con una oración principal clara seguida de 1–2 oraciones de apoyo usando conectores (for example, because, and). Corrige frases confusas y errores léxicos: por ejemplo, "car sky" no tiene sentido; usa "buildings block the sky" o "city skyline". Sé más específico sobre lo que te gusta en el campo.

範例: I prefer rural views because they feel peaceful and natural. For example, I enjoy seeing trees, open skies and wildlife, while city buildings often block the view and feel crowded.

建議: Corrige errores de vocabulario y gramática: "abuse" es incorrecto — probablemente quisiste decir "views" o "to stay". Usa una oración tópica clara y añade detalles específicos con conectores (because, for example). Practica plural y concordancia: "amazing places" y "the sea".

範例: I prefer views in my own country because it has many amazing places to visit, such as mountains, varied landscapes and beautiful coasts. For example, last year I visited a coastal village where the sunset over the sea was unforgettable.

× Yes, I like, but I'm not a good photograph.

✓ Yes, I like taking photos, but I'm not good at photography.

The student used 'photograph' (a noun meaning a picture) to refer to themselves; this is incorrect. Use 'photographer' for a person or rephrase 'good at photography'. Also 'I like' is incomplete; specify what is liked ('taking photos'). Suggestion: say 'I like taking photos, but I'm not good at photography.'

× I prefer views of rural areas because I like to see the the trees and sometimes in the city this car sky is I can see the skies for the buildings and I don't like this so I prefer rural areas to see much animals.

✓ I prefer views of rural areas because I like seeing the trees, and sometimes in the city I cannot see the sky because of the buildings, so I prefer rural areas to see many animals.

Multiple errors: use gerund 'seeing' after 'like' (verb + -ing). Remove duplicate 'the'. 'This car sky is I can see the skies for the buildings' is ungrammatical; express idea as 'I cannot see the sky because of the buildings.' Use 'many animals' not 'much animals' (countable plural requires 'many'). Also simplify sentence with conjunctions and commas. Suggestion: break into clearer clauses and use correct prepositions and quantifiers.

× I prefer abuse in my own country because my country has a lot of amazing place to visit like mountains, landscapes, sea. It's a gorgeous country so I prefer.

✓ I prefer to travel in my own country because it has a lot of amazing places to visit, like mountains, landscapes, and the sea. It's a gorgeous country, so I prefer it.

'Abuse' is incorrect word choice; likely meant 'to travel' or 'to stay.' Use 'a lot of amazing places' (plural) not 'place'. Include articles where needed: 'the sea.' End with 'I prefer it' to refer to the country. Also add commas for clarity. Suggestion: choose appropriate verbs ('travel' or 'stay') and match noun plurality and articles.