视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答自然但有语法和流畅性问题。要点：1) 修正语法错误（例如“when I walking”应为“when I am walking”或“when I walk”）；2) 减少犹豫词（umm, uh），让句子更简洁；3) 使用连接词让回答更连贯，例如先给主题句再给两到三个具体例子并稍作描述；4) 控制长度不超过5句。练习时可大声朗读并录音，自查语法和犹豫词。

範例: Yes, I do. I often take pictures when I am walking in the city because I enjoy capturing interesting clouds and beautiful lakes. For example, last week I photographed a dramatic sunset over a lake, and the colours were amazing. I also like candid shots of people walking, as they show everyday life.

建議: 回答明确但不完整且有停顿与不必要的冗余。要点：1) 避免结尾突然中断，补充完整的评价或原因；2) 用连接词（for example, because, so）使理由更清晰；3) 用更多具体细节说明“different lifestyles”的含义；4) 控制犹豫词并保持句子完整。

範例: I prefer urban views because cities show a variety of lifestyles and activities. For example, you can photograph street markets, commuters rushing to work, and couples chatting in parks, which reveal different daily routines and emotions.

建議: 回答有观点但表达重复且未完成句子。要点：1) 避免重复（"different views"和"various beautiful sceneries"意思重叠），用更具体的例子说明喜欢本国的原因；2) 修正语法（use "prefer views in my country to those in other countries"），并完成结尾；3) 加入连接词给出具体例证（for instance, in the south... in the north...）；4) 减少犹豫并保持句子完整性。

範例: I prefer views in my own country because China offers a wide range of landscapes. For instance, I can visit scenic mountains in the north, tranquil lakes in the south, and historic cityscapes, so each trip feels unique and memorable.

× I usually take pictures when I walking on the street.

✓ I usually take pictures when I am walking on the street.

原句中動詞走（walk）在表示進行時需要使用動詞-ing形式並與適當的助動詞連用。正確用法為 be + 動詞-ing。建議使用 "I am walking" 或簡略口語中的 "I'm walking"，以表達“當我正在街上走的時候”。（語法類型對應：8）

× It's very.

✓ It's very interesting.

原句不完整，只包含主語和系動詞 but 缺少表語，導致句子無法表達完整意義。應補上形容詞或名詞短語來完成句子，例如“very interesting”或“very meaningful”。（語法類型對應：26）

× I prefer views in my country to other countries.

✓ I prefer views in my country to those in other countries.

原句比較結構不完整。比較兩者時應保持名詞短語一致，應以代詞或重複名詞來代替“views”。在此使用"those"代表“other countries' views”，並在後面加上介詞短語"in other countries"以保持平行結構。中文解釋：比較時要保持結構對等，使用代詞 "those" 可以避免歧義。 （語法類型對應：11）

× In China, we could see different views with various beautiful sceneries in different places.

✓ In China, we can see a variety of beautiful scenes in different places.

原句中使用了"could"會讓時態語氣顯得不確定或過去式，與說話者描述普遍事實不符。另用詞 "views with various beautiful sceneries" 表達冗長且不自然，應改為常見搭配"a variety of beautiful scenes"或"various beautiful landscapes"。中文解釋：把"could"改成一般現在時的"can"來描述普遍事實，並簡化名詞短語以更符合英語習慣。（語法類型對應：12）