视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答需要更直接、自然并且更有条理。避免含糊和语法错误（例如“run circles”、“anticipated”用法不当）。应先给出明确的主题句，然后用一两句具体细节支持（如你喜欢拍哪些景色、用什么设备、拍照的目的）。控制在最多五句内，避免重复词和语气词如“uh”。

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. I especially like landscapes and city skylines because they capture atmosphere and light. I often use my smartphone or a small mirrorless camera and try to take pictures during sunrise or sunset for better colors.

建議: 答案简洁但过于单薄。应在主题句后补充一到两句具体原因和例子，并使用连接词使表达更连贯，例如“because”或“so”。这样可以展示理由和个人偏好。

範例: I prefer views in urban areas because I enjoy the variety of architecture and street scenes. For example, I like photographing busy markets and modern skyscrapers, which often offer interesting contrasts of light and shadow.

建議: 回答包含原因但可以更具体。建议添加具体例子或经历来支持观点，并使用连词使结构清晰。避免泛泛而谈，写出你在其他国家拍摄时注意到的具体差异或带来的感受。

範例: I prefer views in other countries because they offer different cultural scenes and architectural styles. For instance, when I visited Japan I enjoyed photographing traditional houses and temples, which were very different from the buildings at home and gave me new ideas for composition.

× Yes, I like taking pictures of different views from run circles to countries and then uh, from my perspective I prefer anticipated.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views, from running circles to countries, and from my perspective I prefer anticipated ones.

原句存在用词和句子结构问题：1) “run circles” 用法不当，应该用动名词短语如 “running circles” 或更自然的表达。2) “to countries” 与前面并列时需要并列形式一致并用逗号隔开。3) “I prefer anticipated” 不完整，anticipated 为形容词需接名词，如 “anticipated ones”。建议：把不自然的短语改为正确的名词/动名词形式并保持并列结构一致；在“anticipated”后补上名词或代词。

× I prefer views in other countries because it brings me a new perspective and I can enjoy different culture.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because they bring me a new perspective and I can enjoy different cultures.

原句有数和代词不一致以及复数名词使用问题：1) 主语 “views” 为复数，但谓语用单数动词 “brings”，应改为复数动词 “bring”。这属于主谓一致（subject-verb agreement）。2) “different culture” 应为复数 “different cultures” 或加定冠词/限定词（a different culture）以表达可数名词。建议：将动词与复数主语一致，且将可数名词改为复数形式以匹配语义。