视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammatical accuracy and natural phrasing, and tighten the response to avoid minor redundancy. Correct subject-verb agreement (e.g., “the orange used in the sky give” → “the orange in the sky gives”) and reduce wordiness. Keep to a clear topic sentence, one or two supporting details, and use a linking word to connect ideas.

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views, especially on morning or evening walks when I can capture sunrises and sunsets. The orange glow in the sky gives me a sense of warmth, so I save those pictures to remind myself of peaceful moments.

建議: Good content and structure; improve cohesion and punctuation. Replace the comma list with clearer phrasing and connect the two sentences with a linking word or phrase (e.g., “Moreover” or “This is because”) to make the relationship explicit. Slightly more specific examples would raise the score further.

範例: Since I grew up in the city, I prefer photographing rural areas because they offer more natural landscapes, such as rivers, sandy banks and diverse plant life. Moreover, their peaceful atmosphere helps me capture richer textures and colors in my photos.

建議: Answer is natural and relevant but can be slightly more concise and better linked. Combine the ideas to avoid repetition and use a linking word (e.g., “however” or “because”), and give one specific example of a local place to strengthen the response.

範例: I haven't traveled abroad yet, so I prefer views in my own country because places like the nearby coastal towns and mountain trails feel more familiar and authentic, and I can visit them easily on weekends.

× The orange used in the sky give me a real sense of warmth, and I often save those photos to remind myself of peaceful moments.

✓ The orange used in the sky gives me a real sense of warmth, and I often save those photos to remind myself of peaceful moments.

Subject-verb agreement with singular subject 'The orange' requires singular verb 'gives'. Change 'give' to 'gives'. Suggestion: Ensure the verb agrees with the singular or plural subject (e.g., 'The color gives', 'The colors give').

× Since I've lived most of my life in the city, I prefer photographing rural areas because natural landscapes are more abundant there, rivers, sandy banks, and a wider variety of plants.

✓ Since I've lived most of my life in the city, I prefer photographing rural areas because natural landscapes are more abundant there, such as rivers, sandy banks, and a wider variety of plants.

The sentence lists examples but lacks a linking preposition or phrase. Insert 'such as' (a prepositional phrase) to introduce examples correctly. Suggestion: Use 'such as' or 'for example' when listing examples (e.g., '...are more abundant there, such as rivers...').

× And they feel more peaceful, which helps me capture richer textures and colors in my photos.

✓ They feel more peaceful, which helps me capture richer textures and colors in my photos.

Starting a sentence with coordinating conjunction 'And' is informal and unnecessary here. Remove 'And' to form a grammatically complete sentence. Suggestion: Avoid beginning formal sentences with 'And'; connect ideas with commas or relative clauses as done here.