视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Говорите более естественно и прямо, формулируя основную мысль в первом предложении; избегайте повторов и добавьте причину и пример. Например, вместо двух однотипных фраз скажите короткое отрицание, затем объясните почему и приведите пример. Также используйте связку (because, for example) для связности и старайтесь не превышать 3–4 предложений.

範例: Not really. I don't enjoy taking photos of views because I find it repetitive and uncreative; for example, I prefer taking photos of people because their expressions change and tell a story.

建議: Начинайте с прямого ответа (I prefer...), затем дайте конкретные причины с логическими связками и уточняющие детали. Избегайте неопределённых выражений («people's kind of»); лучше использовать конкретные описания (friendly people, peaceful atmosphere). Держите 2–4 предложения и используйте слова-связки (because, also, for example).

範例: I prefer rural areas because they are peaceful and the people are friendlier; for example, villages near my hometown have quiet lanes and friendly neighbours, which makes me feel relaxed.

建議: Отвечайте точно на вопрос (own country or other countries) и избегайте неточных слов («wheels») и неподходящих комментариев про людей (оценочные фразы о «красивых девушках» неуместны). Дайте причины и конкретные примеры, объясняя, что вам нравится в видах других стран (ландшафт, архитектура, культура). Старайтесь использовать уважительные, уместные формулировки и 2–3 связных предложения.

範例: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy seeing different landscapes and architecture; for example, in Korea I admired the cherry blossoms in spring and the unique traditional buildings, which felt very different from home.

× No, I don't like pictures because it's not interesting for me and I had pictures and it's boring for me.

✓ No, I don't like taking pictures because it's not interesting to me and I have taken pictures before, and they were boring for me.

The student used incorrect pronouns and verb forms. 'It's' refers to a singular thing but 'pictures' is plural; use 'they' for plural. 'Interesting for me' should be 'interesting to me'. 'I had pictures' is inappropriate for experience; use present perfect 'I have taken pictures before' to indicate past experience relevant now. 'It's boring for me' should be 'they were boring for me' for plural and past reference. Suggestion: match pronouns to noun number, use 'interesting to someone', and use present perfect for past experiences that affect the present.

× Yes, I do. I prefer rural areas because it's comfortable and people's kind of. My favorite place is rural areas.

✓ Yes, I do. I prefer rural areas because they are comfortable and the people are kind. My favorite places are rural areas.

Multiple pronoun and agreement errors: 'it's comfortable' uses singular 'it' for plural 'rural areas'—use 'they are comfortable'. 'people's kind of' is ungrammatical; correct is 'the people are kind'. 'My favorite place is rural areas' mixes singular 'place' with plural 'areas'—use 'places are rural areas' or 'My favorite place is the countryside.' Suggestion: ensure pronouns agree in number with their nouns and use clear noun phrases like 'the people' or 'the countryside'.

× Yes, I prefer wheels in other countries, for example Korea, Korea it's very beautiful and a lot flowers. And beautiful girls, maybe.

✓ Yes, I prefer views in other countries, for example Korea. Korea is very beautiful and has a lot of flowers. And there are also many beautiful people, perhaps.

Several issues: 'wheels' is the wrong word; likely meant 'views'. Repetition 'Korea, Korea it's' is redundant and 'it's' should be separated with a period. 'a lot flowers' needs 'a lot of flowers' or 'has many flowers'—use 'has a lot of flowers'. 'Beautiful girls, maybe' is informal and awkward; better to say 'many beautiful people, perhaps' if commenting on people. Also use 'there are' for existence of plural nouns. Suggestion: choose correct vocabulary ('views'), avoid repetition, and use 'there is/are' for existence and 'has' for attributes of places.