视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and organized: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons or an example. Reduce hesitations and filler words (uh, umm) and correct unclear phrases (e.g., 'time to talk', 'rising'). Use linking words like 'because' or 'and' to connect ideas.

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because they capture unique moments and moods. For example, I often photograph sunsets to preserve the colors and atmosphere, and later I review the pictures to choose the best ones to share.

建議: Provide a clear direct answer and give specific reasons with better vocabulary. Avoid pronunciation or filler issues and organize the response: state preference, then two concise reasons linked with 'because' or 'as'.

範例: I prefer urban views because cityscapes offer vibrant colors and interesting architecture, which make striking photos. Also, urban scenes usually have diverse lighting and activity, so I can capture more dynamic images to share.

建議: Give a direct answer and support it with specific details and one clear example. Avoid vague statements and repetitive words. Use linking phrases ('for example', 'because', 'also') to make the response coherent.

範例: I prefer views in other countries because they expose me to new landscapes and cultures. For example, when I visited Thailand last month, the coastal scenery and vibrant street scenes were unlike anything at home, which made the experience memorable.

× I like to look at my photos time to talk and just umm, look how amazing the photos that I saw because this was rising umm, not with the other word for that.

✓ I like to look at my photos, take time to talk, and just, um, look at how amazing the photos are because the sun was rising, um, I can't remember the other word for that.

Errors: incorrect verb form and sentence structure. 'time to talk' is unclear; 'take time to talk' is correct. 'look how amazing the photos that I saw' is ungrammatical — use 'look at how amazing the photos are' to describe current impressions. 'because this was rising' should be 'because the sun was rising' (missing subject and wrong demonstrative). Suggestion: break long run-on into shorter clauses, use correct preposition 'look at', and supply the missing noun 'sun' and correct tense 'was rising' to describe a past background event.

× I don't know, I feel the same.

✓ I don't know; I feel the same way.

Error: incomplete expression. 'I feel the same' is understandable but sounds incomplete; add 'way' for natural collocation. Use appropriate punctuation to separate ideas.

× Island urban areas, to be honest, because I can see I can take a really good photos, the views, the colors, It's really M uh, it's really good to post on social media.

✓ I like urban areas, to be honest, because I can take really good photos of the views and the colors. They're great to post on social media.

Errors: 'Island urban areas' is incorrect adjective use — likely meant 'I like urban areas'. Article and number: 'a really good photos' mixes singular article with plural noun; remove 'a' and use 'really good photos'. Sentence structure fragmented; combine into coherent sentences. Capitalization and filler 'M uh' removed. Use plural pronoun 'they're' to refer to 'photos'.

× Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

✓ (No correction needed)

This question sentence is grammatically correct and requires no change.

× I do like the fuse in other countries. It's like really amazing because everything is new for me.

✓ I do like the views in other countries. They're really amazing because everything is new to me.

Errors: 'fuse' is a wrong word choice; should be 'views'. 'It's like really amazing' is awkward — use 'They're really amazing' to match plural 'views'. Use 'new to me' not 'new for me' for personal experience.

× For example, I traveled to Thailand last month. I feel like the view was so amazing.

✓ For example, I traveled to Thailand last month. I felt that the views were amazing.

Inconsistency of tense: main action is past ('traveled'), so the reaction should also be past ('felt'). Use plural 'views' if referring to multiple scenes; match verb 'were' with plural subject. Also 'so amazing' is acceptable but 'amazing' suffices.

× Everything was new, which is just really good. It was clean. I get so it's.

✓ Everything was new, which was really nice. It was clean and well maintained.

Errors: tense inconsistency and fragmented phrasing. 'which is just really good' should match past context: 'which was really nice.' 'I get so it's' is ungrammatical and unclear; replace with a clear positive comment such as 'It was clean and well maintained.' Suggestion: avoid fragments and ensure tense consistency.