视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Parla più chiaramente e in modo più conciso: inizia con una frase tematica diretta, evita ripetizioni e correggi errori grammaticali (es. plurale/singolare). Usa una o due frasi di supporto con dettagli specifici e un collegamento logico.

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. I especially like candid shots when I am with friends because those pictures capture real moments and emotions. For example, when we watch a sunset together I often photograph their reactions to remember the experience.

建議: Organizza la risposta: inizia dichiarando la tua preferenza, poi spiega con due motivi chiari usando parole di collegamento (because, however). Evita ripetizioni e frasi interrotte; usa verbi corretti e forme complete.

範例: I prefer urban views because I grew up in the city and I enjoy its architecture and busy streets. However, I also like photographing rural areas when I travel because they offer peaceful landscapes and natural details that contrast with city scenes.

建議: Rispondi direttamente e poi confronta con dettagli specifici: dì chiaramente se preferisci l'Italia o l'estero, poi fornisci esempi concreti e un breve confronto usando connettivi (for example, however). Evita ripetizioni come "the the" e imprecisioni grammaticali.

範例: I love the views in Italy because of its historic towns and coastal scenery, but I also appreciate views in other countries. For example, I was impressed by the dramatic mountains in Norway, which offered a very different and equally stunning landscape compared to Italy.

× Well, I like to take pictures of the different views, but what I like MO mostly is taking picture of the view.

✓ Well, I like to take pictures of different views, but what I like most is taking pictures of the view.

The student omitted plural forms and misused the gerund phrase. 'Most' is correct word order, and 'taking pictures' requires plural 'pictures'. Use 'different views' without 'the' for general meaning. Improve by practicing gerund subjects (taking) with correct noun number and word order.

× But with my friends, with the people who are with me in this moment, this is the most.

✓ But with my friends, the people who are with me at the moment, I enjoy it the most.

The original sentence lacks a clear subject and verb and misuses 'this is the most'. Replace with 'I enjoy it the most' and use 'at the moment' for current time. Practice forming complete clauses with subject + verb.

× What I I'm born and raised in urban areas and for this reason I prefer it at the at the end.

✓ I was born and raised in urban areas, and for this reason I prefer them in the end.

The phrase 'What I I'm' is ungrammatical and mixes tenses. Use past simple 'I was born and raised'. 'Urban areas' is plural, so refer to 'them'. The clause 'in the end' is unclear; if meaning 'ultimately', use 'in the end' or 'overall'. Ensure pronouns match noun number.

× But yeah, when I I like to visit cities and taking a picture and yeah, something a way to understand how the different cities are.

✓ But yeah, I like to visit cities and take pictures; it's a way to understand how different cities are.

After 'like to' use the base verb 'take', not 'taking'. Also remove redundant words and use 'it's a way to understand' to form a complete sentence. Use plural 'pictures' and omit 'the' before 'different cities' for general reference.

× OK, I would like to say that I was born and raised in Italy and you know Italy has some of the the best views in the world.

✓ OK, I would like to say that I was born and raised in Italy, and Italy has some of the best views in the world.

Redundant 'the the' and punctuation fixes. The tense 'was born and raised' (past) is correct; keep present 'has' for a general fact. Remove extra article and ensure comma before conjunction.

× But traveling I understood that there are many countries with the views are even better.

✓ But while traveling, I realized that there are many countries whose views are even better.

Original mixes clause structures: 'with the views are' is incorrect. Use 'whose views are' to show possession or restructure 'the views in which are' is wrong. Also 'understood' is acceptable but 'realized' is more natural. Use 'while traveling' to introduce the time clause.