视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise, correct grammar, and give a clear reason with a brief detail. Use a topic sentence that directly answers, then add one or two specific supporting points. Avoid repetition (you said 'not fond of taking photography skills' and then 'want to improve' which conflict).

範例: No, I don't usually take pictures of different views because I haven't learned photography techniques yet. However, I would like to improve my skills, so I sometimes practice simple landscape shots with my phone to learn about composition and lighting.

建議: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (use past participles and articles), remove fillers (uh, umm), and add one specific reason or example. Use a linking phrase to connect the reason.

範例: I prefer views in rural areas because I grew up in the city and rarely visited the countryside. For example, I enjoy places like Naran and Kaghan for their quiet valleys, fresh air, and mountain scenery.

建議: Start with a direct answer, correct grammar (views plural, remove fillers), and give a specific reason and brief supporting detail. Mention one or two examples of foreign places or what attracts you to them.

範例: I prefer views in other countries because I have already seen many of my country's notable places. For instance, I follow travel photographers on social media and I am especially drawn to European coastal towns and Japanese gardens, which I would like to visit for their different architecture and landscapes.

× No, I don't like taking pictures of different views because I'm not fond of taking photography skills.

✓ No, I don't like taking pictures of different views because I'm not good at photography skills.

The phrase 'fond of taking photography skills' is incorrect. After 'fond of' we expect a noun or gerund referring to an activity (e.g., 'photography') or an ability phrase such as 'good at photography'. Using 'taking' before 'photography skills' is ungrammatical. Suggest using 'good at photography' or 'fond of photography' to express ability or liking. Suggested grammar problem type ID: 8

× I just want to improve my photography skills.

✓ I just want to improve my photography skills.

This sentence is grammatically correct and matches the present intention 'want to' plus base verb 'improve'. No change needed. (No grammar problem within the given list.)

× I prefer in rural areas because I born in uh, urban side and uh, I barely visit uh, rural areas so I prefer views in rural areas, umm, just like umm, Naran Kagan.

✓ I prefer rural areas because I was born on the urban side and I have rarely visited rural areas, so I prefer views of rural areas, like Naran Kaghan.

Multiple issues: 'prefer in rural areas' should be 'prefer rural areas' (incorrect preposition), 'I born' lacks auxiliary verb 'was' for past passive (There be/past tense form), 'urban side' is better with article and preposition 'on the urban side', 'I barely visit rural areas' should use present perfect 'have rarely visited' to indicate experience up to now, and 'Naran Kagan' likely intended 'Naran Kaghan' or 'Kaghan'; use 'views of rural areas' for correct noun phrase. Suggestions: include the auxiliary 'was' for past passive, use correct prepositions, and use present perfect for life experience. Suggested grammar problem type IDs: 11,5,3,6

× I prefer view in uh, other countries because I have visited almost all views in my country.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because I have visited almost all the views in my country.

Use plural 'views' to match 'other countries' and 'prefer views' rather than 'prefer view'. The preposition 'in' with 'other countries' is fine but 'view' must be plural. Also include the definite article 'the' before 'views in my country' to specify those particular views. This fixes singular/plural and article issues. Suggested grammar problem type IDs: 1,22

× I just review other country views in social media so I want to visit that.

✓ I just see views of other countries on social media, so I want to visit them.

'Review' is inappropriate here; 'see' or 'look at' fits better for viewing photos on social media. 'Other country views' should be 'views of other countries' (preposition use and plural). 'That' is unclear and should match plural 'views' with 'them'. Suggestions: use 'see views of other countries on social media' and 'visit them' to refer back to the views/places. Suggested grammar problem type IDs: 11,1,26