视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant and shows enthusiasm, but it has some grammar mistakes, redundancy and slightly awkward phrasing. To improve, make your sentences more concise, correct collocations (e.g., 'keepsake memories' → 'keepsakes' or 'memories'), and avoid repeating similar ideas. Use one clear topic sentence followed by one or two supporting details. Also check verb forms and articles (e.g., 'I enjoy my travel' → 'I enjoy travelling' or 'I enjoy my travels').

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views, especially landscapes and cityscapes. For example, when I travel with friends or family I take pictures of mountain ranges and green fields to keep as souvenirs.

建議: Your response communicates a clear preference but contains unclear phrasing and grammar errors (e.g., 'sceneries that or one wants', 'picturesque of landscapes'). To improve, state your preference in a single clear sentence and then give two specific reasons, linked with connectors like 'because' or 'as'. Use precise vocabulary (e.g., 'rural scenery', 'peaceful', 'picturesque landscapes').

範例: I prefer rural scenery because the countryside is much more peaceful and relaxing. For instance, I like walking among picturesque fields and trees, which helps me unwind after a busy week.

建議: The idea is understandable but the answer is incomplete and contains grammar mistakes. Improve by giving a clear comparison structure ('I prefer... to...') and complete your sentence with specific examples of what makes your country's scenery special. Avoid fragmented endings and include linking words like 'because' and 'for example'.

範例: I prefer the scenery in my own country to that of other countries because the Philippines has many beautiful islands and beaches. For example, the combination of dramatic coastlines, tropical forests and clear blue water makes our landscapes uniquely stunning.

× Yes, I do love capturing photos of different views, most especially beautiful landscapes, city views, dramatic mountain ranges and lush green fields.

✓ Yes, I love capturing photos of different views, especially beautiful landscapes, city views, dramatic mountain ranges, and lush green fields.

Redundant use of 'do' as an auxiliary with 'love' is unnecessary in a declarative sentence; use simple present 'I love'. 'Most especially' is wordy; 'especially' is more natural. Also add a comma before final item in the list for clarity. Suggestion: Use simple present without unnecessary auxiliary and streamline intensifiers.

× I enjoy my travel with my friends and relatives and take photos with them because it gives me keepsakes memories.

✓ I enjoy travelling with my friends and relatives and take photos with them because it gives me keepsake memories.

Subject-verb agreement and word form: 'travel' as a noun is unidiomatic here; use the gerund 'travelling' to mean the activity. 'Gives' refers to 'taking photos' (plural), so better to use 'give' or rephrase; here 'it gives me keepsake memories' is awkward because 'keepsake' should be an adjective before 'memories' and 'it' is unclear. Revised sentence uses 'gives me keepsake memories' but a clearer option is 'because they give me keepsake memories.' Suggestion: Use gerund for activities and ensure pronoun and verb agree with intended subject; use correct adjective form 'keepsake.'

× I prefer rural sceneries that or one wants because the countryside offers more tranquility and sense of serendipity.

✓ I prefer rural scenery because the countryside offers more tranquility and a sense of serendipity.

'Sceneries' is uncountable in this context; use 'scenery'. The fragment 'that or one wants' is ungrammatical and should be removed. Add article 'a' before 'sense'. Suggestion: Use 'scenery' as a mass noun, remove unclear fragments, and include articles where needed.

× I especially enjoy picturesque of landscapes, beautiful trees and lush green fields which make me relax and comfortable.

✓ I especially enjoy picturesque landscapes, beautiful trees, and lush green fields, which help me relax and feel comfortable.

'Picturesque' is an adjective and must modify a noun directly: use 'picturesque landscapes' not 'picturesque of landscapes.' Also add commas for list items. 'Which make me relax and comfortable' is unidiomatic; use 'help me relax and feel comfortable.' Suggestion: Place adjectives before nouns and use verbs like 'help' with appropriate complements.

× I would say that I like my country's sceneries than other countries because Philippines is a well known archipelago in Southeast Asia.

✓ I would say that I prefer my country's scenery to other countries' because the Philippines is a well-known archipelago in Southeast Asia.

Comparative structure error: use 'prefer A to B' not 'like A than B.' 'Sceneries' should be 'scenery' (mass noun). 'Philippines' as a country name needs the definite article 'the'. 'Well known' should be hyphenated as 'well-known' when used as an adjective. Also possessive for 'other countries' requires apostrophe. Suggestion: Use 'prefer A to B', correct noun forms, include articles, and hyphenate compound adjectives.

× It offers a lot of stunning.

✓ It offers a lot of stunning scenery.

Phrase is incomplete: 'stunning' is an adjective and needs a noun to modify. Add 'scenery' to complete the thought. Alternatively, say 'It offers a lot of stunning sights' or 'It is very stunning.' Suggestion: Ensure adjectives are followed by the nouns they modify or convert to a noun phrase.