视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer conveys meaning but has grammar errors, repetitions and a lack of clear structure. To improve, start with a concise topic sentence, avoid repeating words, correct grammar (e.g. “taking pictures helps us preserve memories”), and add one specific supporting detail or example. Keep the response to at most 3–4 short sentences and use linking words (for example, “because” or “so”) to connect ideas.

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me preserve special moments. For example, I often photograph sunsets at the beach to remember the colours and atmosphere. I also like capturing city streets when I travel so I can look back on those experiences.

建議: Your answer is relevant and gives a reason, but hesitations and some grammatical mistakes reduce clarity. Improve by removing fillers, using a clear topic sentence, giving one specific reason with an example, and linking ideas (e.g. “because,” “for example,” “as a result”). Also correct noun/verb agreement (e.g. “every rural area has its own unique view and character”).

範例: I prefer rural views because they tend to be calmer and more picturesque. For example, I enjoy visiting small villages where I can photograph rolling hills and traditional houses. As a result, I feel more relaxed and able to unwind in those places.

建議: Your answer answers the question but is vague and full of hesitations. Make a direct topic sentence (e.g. “I like both, but I slightly prefer…”), give a clear condition or comparison, and provide a concrete example. Remove fillers and use linking words like “however,” “because,” or “for example” to clarify when you prefer each option.

範例: I like views in both my own country and abroad, but I slightly prefer photographing scenes at home because they are familiar and meaningful to me. However, when I travel I focus on unique landmarks or cultural scenes; for example, I took many photos of traditional festivals abroad to capture details I can't see at home.

× Yes I like taking pictures of different views and I always try to capture the moments and also I think they taking a picture help us to save a good memories so I I adore.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views. I always try to capture the moments, and I also think taking pictures helps us save good memories, so I adore it.

Multiple issues: 'they taking a picture' is incorrect; the gerund 'taking' should be used with a subject or rephrased. Use 'taking pictures helps' (singular verb) because the gerund phrase is singular. Remove unnecessary articles: 'a good memories' should be 'good memories'. Also split into clearer sentences and add 'it' after 'adore' to complete the verb's object. Suggestion: use gerund phrases as subjects followed by singular verbs and watch article+noun agreement. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× I always try to capture the moments and also I think they taking a picture help us to save a good memories so I I adore.

✓ I always try to capture moments, and I also think that taking pictures helps us save good memories, so I adore it.

The pronoun 'they' is incorrectly used before 'taking a picture'; there is no clear antecedent. Remove 'they' or replace with a correct subject. Also 'a good memories' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'good memories' without 'a'. Include 'that' after 'think' for clarity. Suggestion: avoid using 'they' when no plural noun was previously referenced; use gerund phrase 'taking pictures' as the subject. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× I always try to capture the moments and also I think they taking a picture help us to save a good memories so I I adore.

✓ I always try to capture moments, and I also think that taking pictures helps us save good memories, so I adore it.

'The moments' is acceptable but often unnecessary; 'moments' without 'the' is more natural. More importantly, 'a good memories' is wrong because 'a' requires a singular noun; use 'good memories' (plural) or 'a good memory' (singular). Suggestion: match articles to noun number and prefer concise noun phrases. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× I always try to capture the moments and also I think they taking a picture help us to save a good memories so I I adore.

✓ I always try to capture moments, and I also think that taking pictures helps us save good memories, so I adore it.

The verb 'help' should be 'helps' because the subject is the gerund phrase 'taking pictures', which is singular. Ensure subject-verb agreement for third person singular subjects. Suggestion: identify the true subject (gerund phrase) and add 's' to the verb. Grammar problem type ID: 2

× I prefer views, uh, umm, the rural, uh, rural areas because I think, uh, they, every rural areas have the, its unique view and unique soul.

✓ I prefer rural areas because I think every rural area has its own unique view and spirit.

Problems: 'they' is unnecessary and confusing; 'every rural areas' mixes 'every' with a plural noun—use singular 'every rural area'. 'Have the, its unique view' is redundant and ungrammatical; use 'has its own unique view'. 'Unique soul' is acceptable but 'spirit' is more natural. Suggestion: use 'every' with singular nouns and use 'its' to refer back to singular nouns. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× I prefer views, uh, umm, the rural, uh, rural areas because I think, uh, they, every rural areas have the, its unique view and unique soul.

✓ I prefer rural areas because I think every rural area has its own unique view and spirit.

'Every' must be followed by a singular noun: use 'every rural area' not 'every rural areas'. Also 'areas' vs 'area' mismatch with verbs: use singular verb 'has'. Suggestion: check agreement between 'every' and the noun. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× So for me, it's very important. I feel more relaxed and I always try to go in, uh, the rural areas when I would like to unwind.

✓ For me, it's very important. I feel more relaxed, and I always try to go to rural areas when I want to unwind.

Use 'go to' rather than 'go in' for visiting places. 'When I would like to unwind' is awkward; in general statements use simple present 'when I want to unwind'. Replace 'the rural areas' with 'rural areas' unless specifying particular ones. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions and correct prepositions for movement. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× Umm, actually I would like umm, views in my own country and also other countries.

✓ Actually, I would like views from my own country as well as from other countries.

The original omission of preposition 'from' makes the sentence unclear. Use 'views from' to indicate origin. 'Also other countries' is better phrased 'as well as from other countries'. Suggestion: include correct prepositions with nouns indicating origin. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× Uh, it's depend on the situation, Uh, and also when I see something specific, I always try to save this moment by taking photos.

✓ It depends on the situation, and when I see something specific, I always try to capture the moment by taking photos.

'It's depend' is incorrect; use 'it depends' (s for third person). 'Save this moment' is understandable but 'capture the moment' is a more natural collocation. Ensure subject-verb agreement with 'it'. Suggestion: use correct present tense for general facts and prefer natural collocations. Grammar problem type ID: 4