视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more grammatically accurate and complete your idea with a clear topic sentence plus supporting detail. Use linking words (for example, because/so/and) and keep it concise (1–3 sentences). Mention what feelings or memories the photos evoke and why you take them.

範例: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views because they help me remember special moments. For example, when I look back at photos from trips I feel happy and can recall little details I would otherwise forget.

建議: Give a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then support it with two specific reasons using linking words (for example, because/also). Avoid filler words and unclear phrases; be specific about what you like in cities (architecture, street life, cafés, etc.).

範例: I prefer urban views because cities have interesting architecture and vibrant street scenes. For example, I enjoy photographing old buildings and busy markets, which show local life and color.

建議: Make the answer concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a specific reason and an example. Use linking words like because and for example to organize your answer.

範例: I prefer views in other countries because they offer unfamiliar landscapes that feel exciting. For example, I loved photographing coastal cliffs and traditional villages abroad, which were very different from places at home.

× Yes, I love it is because I can see later. When I look back on my pictures and it gives me.

✓ Yes, I love it because I can look back at my pictures later and remember those moments.

The original contains fragmented and run-on clauses and incorrect connectors ('it is because', 'and it gives me'). This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). To fix it, combine ideas into a single clear sentence: use 'because' to introduce the reason, use 'look back at' (correct preposition) and a clear result ('remember those moments'). Avoid unnecessary pronouns like 'it' that do not refer clearly to a noun.

× I prefer city areas pictures because, uh, there are a lot of wonderful buildings and call and people's. I like you especially.

✓ I prefer pictures of city areas because there are a lot of wonderful buildings and interesting places; I especially like them.

The original misuses pronouns and has unclear noun phrases ('city areas pictures', 'call and people's', 'I like you especially'). This falls under incorrect use of pronouns (ID 12) and also sentence structure. Corrections: use 'pictures of city areas' (correct word order), replace unclear words with 'interesting places', and use 'them' to refer back to 'pictures'. 'I especially like them' correctly links the pronoun to the noun.

× I prefer views in other countries because it is exciting to see uncommon sceneries in other countries to see.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because it is exciting to see uncommon scenery there.

This sentence repeats phrases and uses 'it' vaguely and 'sceneries' incorrectly. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and plurality (ID 12 and also 1). Use 'scenery' as an uncountable noun and 'there' to refer to 'other countries'. Remove redundancy ('to see' twice) to make the sentence concise.