视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then give one or two supporting details. Avoid repetition and use correct tense. For example, say when you developed the habit and what kinds of views you photograph.

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. After graduating, I developed a habit of travelling regularly, and I usually take many photos of landscapes and cityscapes to remember each place.

建議: Answer directly (urban or rural) and give specific reasons using linking words. Use correct grammar (plural/singular, verb forms) and avoid vague phrases like "and so on." Provide one or two concrete examples of natural features you like.

範例: I prefer rural views because I find natural landscapes more relaxing. For example, I enjoy mountain panoramas and quiet lakes, as they help me unwind and feel peaceful.

建議: Be direct and use correct phrasing ("to be honest"). Give a clear reason and a specific example, using correct tense and plural agreement. Use a linking phrase to connect reason and example. Avoid filler words like "umm" and "uh."

範例: To be honest, I prefer views in other countries because many popular sites in China can be crowded. For instance, last year I visited Bali and found the beaches and rice terraces much quieter and more enjoyable.

× I like after graduating I make a habit to travel to travel and I will take tons of pictures when I arrive there.

✓ After graduating, I made it a habit to travel, and I take tons of pictures when I arrive at a place.

Errors: sentence structure and tense inconsistency. 'I like after graduating' is awkward; use 'After graduating' as a time phrase. 'I make a habit to travel' is incorrect collocation; use 'made it a habit to travel' (habit + past or present perfect depending on meaning). 'to travel to travel' repeats 'travel'. 'I will take tons of pictures when I arrive there' mixes future with a habitual action; since the speaker describes a habitual action, use present simple 'I take' or past 'I took' depending on context. Also use 'arrive at a place' rather than 'arrive there' for clarity. Suggestion: choose consistent tense and correct collocations. Grammar problem type ID:6,27,26,22

× Umm, I enjoy the natural landscapes and it will make me feel relax, blissful and so on.

✓ I enjoy natural landscapes, and they make me feel relaxed, blissful, and so on.

'It will make me feel' incorrectly uses future when describing a general truth or habitual response; use present simple 'they make me feel'. 'Natural landscapes' does not need the definite article here. 'Relax' is an adjective in this context, so use the past participle/adjective 'relaxed'. Also change the pronoun reference from 'it' to 'they' to agree with plural 'landscapes'. Grammar problem type ID:6,13,27,11

× To be honestly, I prefer the views of other countries.

✓ To be honest, I prefer the views in other countries.

'To be honestly' is incorrect; the fixed expression is 'To be honest'. 'Prefer the views of other countries' is understandable but 'views in other countries' is more natural. The adverb 'honestly' cannot be used in that position; use the adjective form 'honest' in the idiom 'to be honest'. Grammar problem type ID:13,26

× Umm, in China, every single landscape have too many people and I could enjoy myself in other countries.

✓ In China, every single landscape has too many people, so I can enjoy myself in other countries.

'Every single landscape have' is a subject-verb agreement error: 'every' takes a singular verb, so use 'has' not 'have' (Grammar ID 27/1). 'Too many people' is fine, but logical connector is needed: use 'so' to show consequence. 'I could enjoy myself' suggests conditional or past; the speaker likely means general ability/preference, so 'I can enjoy myself' is more appropriate. Also remove the initial filler 'Umm' for formality. Grammar problem type ID:1,27,6,16

× Uh, last year I have been to Bali.

✓ Last year I went to Bali.

'Last year' signals a finished time in the past, so use simple past 'went' rather than present perfect 'have been'. Present perfect is used for unspecified past or experiences without a finished time. Therefore replace 'have been' with 'went'. Grammar problem type ID:5,6