视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Sửa lỗi phát âm và lựa chọn từ; tránh nhầm lẫn từ (ví dụ “salaries” → “scenery” hoặc “views”) và viết câu tự nhiên hơn. Hãy bắt đầu với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó nêu lý do cụ thể và một ví dụ ngắn. Giữ độ dài tối đa 4–5 câu, dùng từ nối khi cần.

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially when I travel to new places. I find photography helps me remember special moments and the atmosphere. For example, I often photograph coastal sunsets because the light and colors change quickly, so photos help me capture them.

建議: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và nối ý rõ ràng (ví dụ dùng “because”/“so” hợp lý); sửa các lỗi số ít/ số nhiều và mạo từ. Bắt đầu với câu chủ đề, sau đó nêu 1–2 lý do cụ thể với từ nối, và kết thúc bằng ví dụ cá nhân ngắn.

範例: I prefer rural views, such as mountains or rivers, because they help me feel relaxed and peaceful. Also, the air is usually fresher than in cities, which makes outdoor activities more enjoyable. For instance, I often go hiking in nearby hills to unwind on weekends.

建議: Sửa ngữ pháp, đại từ và lựa chọn từ; tránh lỗi như “I like you” và “score more”. Nên trả lời trực tiếp với câu chủ đề, giải thích rõ (ví dụ tự nhiên, ký ức, sự quen thuộc) và đưa ví dụ cụ thể. Dùng liên từ để mạch lạc và giữ trong 3–4 câu.

範例: I prefer views in my own country because I feel more connected to the places and proud of their cultural background. I'm also familiar with many local spots, which makes it easier to find meaningful scenes to photograph. For example, I enjoy visiting historic villages at different seasons to see how the landscape changes.

× Yes, I'm really into taking pictures of different salaries, especially when I'm traveling to somewhere new. I think this is a good way for me to keep the memories.

✓ Yes, I'm really into taking pictures of different scenes/views, especially when I'm traveling to somewhere new. I think this is a good way for me to keep memories.

The word 'salaries' is the wrong noun; context requires 'scenes' or 'views'. Also, 'keep the memories' is unnatural; native speakers say 'keep memories' or 'preserve memories'. Suggestion: use context-appropriate nouns and omit 'the' before 'memories' here. Grammar problem type ID: 13

× For me I prefer view in countryside like mountain or river because whatever I'll look at them I feel relaxed and peaceful. Beside the air is also fresher than urban area.

✓ For me, I prefer views in the countryside, like mountains or rivers, because whenever I look at them I feel relaxed and peaceful. Besides, the air is also fresher than in urban areas.

Errors: missing plural forms ('view' -> 'views', 'mountain'/'river' -> plural); missing definite article with 'countryside' and preposition 'in'; 'whatever I'll look at them' is incorrect — use 'whenever I look at them' and remove redundant pronoun; 'Beside' should be 'Besides'; compare 'fresher than in urban areas' requires preposition 'in' and plural 'areas'. Suggestion: pay attention to article usage, plural forms, and idiomatic time words like 'whenever'. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× I think that I like you in my home country more because I familiar to them and I'm very proud of them.

✓ I think that I like places in my home country more because I am familiar with them and I'm very proud of them.

Errors: 'I like you' is wrong pronoun — should be 'places' or 'it'; 'I familiar to them' misses auxiliary 'am' and wrong preposition: use 'familiar with'. Suggestion: ensure subject and object nouns match context and include necessary auxiliary verbs and correct prepositions. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× Beside, there are a lot of places that I still don't know about and I really want to score more.

✓ Besides, there are a lot of places that I still don't know about and I really want to explore more.

'Score more' is incorrect collocation here; likely intended 'see', 'visit', or 'explore'. 'Beside' should be 'Besides'. Suggestion: choose verbs that fit the context of travel (explore/visit/see) and use correct transitional adverb spelling. Grammar problem type ID: 13