视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Сформулируйте ответ яснее и грамматически правильно, используйте связующее слово и избегайте лишних слов. Дайте короткое вступление (topic sentence), затем объяснение и пример. Обратите внимание на времена и порядок слов, а также на выражения «social networks» вместо «network social». Не используйте разговорные вставки типа «yeah» в официальном экзамене.

範例: Not really. I prefer taking photos of my friends and family because those pictures feel more personal and meaningful. For example, I often capture moments at family gatherings and share them on social networks so everyone can see them.

建議: Используйте полные предложения и точные прилагательные, избегайте повтора слов и грамматических ошибок. Начните с прямого утверждения, затем объясните причину, используя связующие слова (because, so, therefore) и конкретные детали (например, пейзажи, тишина). Попрактикуйтесь в согласовании глагола с подлежащим и в использовании существительных вместо прилагательных там, где нужно (vastness, not 'vastness and').

範例: I prefer rural areas because the countryside feels more spacious and peaceful. For example, wide fields and open skies give me a sense of freedom, and I enjoy photographing natural landscapes rather than busy city streets.

建議: Избегайте частых наполнителей («uh», «um») и недописанных мыслей. Дайте полный ответ: напрямую ответьте на вопрос, объясните причину и приведите пример. Уточните, что вы никогда не были за границей, но можно сравнить теоретически или сказать, что предпочитаете местные пейзажи. Используйте правильный порядок слов и корректные выражения («young person», «my own country»).

範例: I have never been to a foreign country, so I prefer taking photos in my own country for now. For instance, I enjoy capturing local festivals and landscapes because they are familiar and easy to access.

× I prefer taking pictures of my friends or my family and send it in network social, yeah.

✓ I prefer taking pictures of my friends or my family and sending them on social networks.

The conjunction 'and' joins two verbs that should be in the same form. After 'prefer' + gerund, use 'sending' (gerund) not 'send' (base form). Also 'pictures' is plural so use 'them', and the typical phrase is 'on social networks'. Suggestion: keep parallel gerunds and use correct preposition and pronoun.

× To be honest I prefer rural rural areas photo because it's look more vastness and. And freedom.

✓ To be honest, I prefer rural-area photos because they look more spacious and free.

Multiple issues: 'rural rural' is repetition; 'areas photo' needs plural noun 'photos' with adjective 'rural-area' or 'rural' before 'photos' (article/word order). 'It's look' is incorrect subject-verb agreement and contraction; use 'they look' for photos (plural). 'More vastness' is incorrect adjective use; use 'more spacious' or 'more vast' and 'freedom' is a noun that doesn't fit — use 'free' (adjective) or 'a sense of freedom'. Suggestions: remove repetition, match plural subject with plural verb, use appropriate adjective forms and word order.

× Uh, to be honest, I have, uh, not ever been in uh, foreign country and uh, because I am young guy and uh, I prefer uh, own place for photos because it's.

✓ To be honest, I have never been to a foreign country, and because I am a young man, I prefer taking photos in my own country.

Use 'have never been' instead of 'have not ever been' for natural present perfect; use preposition 'to' with 'been to a country' and include the article 'a' before 'foreign country'. 'Young guy' is informal; 'young man' is more standard and needs the article 'a'. 'Own place for photos' is awkward — 'my own country' or 'at home' is clearer. The sentence ended with 'because it's' incomplete; complete the thought and use gerund 'taking photos'. Suggestions: use correct prepositions and articles, complete clauses, and maintain consistent tense and word forms.