视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more fluent and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh), and give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Use correct grammar and natural phrases (e.g., "I don't really enjoy taking landscape photos"). Limit to 2–3 sentences to sound natural.

範例: I don't really enjoy taking landscape photos because I prefer to experience places directly rather than through a camera. Moreover, I find taking many photos time-consuming, so I usually take only a few to remember the moment.

建議: Open with a clear preference sentence, then support it with specific details and a linking word. Correct grammar (e.g., "I prefer views in my country") and avoid absolute claims like "the best" without explanation. Give a short reason or example to be persuasive.

範例: I prefer views in my own country because its landscapes are very diverse and beautiful. For example, we have both dramatic mountains and peaceful beaches, so I can enjoy different kinds of scenery without traveling far.

建議: Give a concise direct answer then add a specific, relevant reason. Avoid repetitions and incorrect grammar (e.g., "everyone have have to see"). Use linking words like "because" or "for example" and provide a concrete detail or example of what makes the views special.

範例: I prefer views in my own country because the scenery is very unique and rich in culture. For example, our coastal cliffs and traditional villages offer unforgettable sunsets and local architecture that I think visitors should experience.

× I do not like taking pictures of different views, but my family likes a lot.

✓ I do not like taking pictures of different views, but my family likes it a lot.

The phrase 'likes a lot' needs an object; add 'it' to show what the family likes. This is an incorrect use of quantification/placement. Suggestion: use 'likes it a lot' or 'likes taking pictures a lot.'

× Uh, I don't like because, uh, I think it's a waste.

✓ I don't like it because I think it's a waste.

The clause 'I don't like because' is incomplete; 'like' needs an object or 'it' to refer to taking pictures. Combine clauses without filler 'uh' and include 'it'.

× It's just a wasting time for me.

✓ It's just a waste of time for me.

'wasting' is a present participle used incorrectly here; the correct noun phrase is 'a waste of time.' Replace 'a wasting time' with 'a waste of time.'

× Uh, I think photos are not, are nothing for me.

✓ I think photos mean nothing to me.

The original is ungrammatical and redundant. Use 'mean nothing to me' to express lack of value. This fixes sentence structure and preposition use.

× I prefer a views in my country because my country is gorgeous for me and I can't change my country to another country.

✓ I prefer the views in my country because my country is gorgeous to me and I can't change my country for another one.

'a views' is wrong: 'views' is plural so remove 'a' and use 'the' or no article; 'gorgeous for me' better as 'gorgeous to me'; 'change my country to another country' should be 'change my country for another one.' Fixes article and preposition errors.

× I think my country is the best and other countries also have some good views but my country has better.

✓ I think my country is the best. Other countries also have some good views, but my country has better ones.

Sentence needed splitting for clarity and 'has better' must be followed by a noun ('ones') when comparing; this fixes omitted object in comparison. Also punctuation improves structure.

× I prefer views in my country because my country is gorgeous.

✓ I prefer the views in my country because my country is gorgeous.

When referring to a specific set of views (those in the student's country), use the definite article 'the' before 'views.' This clarifies reference.

× Everyone have have to see and visit my country.

✓ Everyone has to see and visit my country.

'Everyone' is singular and requires 'has' not 'have.' Also remove duplicate 'have.'

× To see some wheels, some sunshines, everyone must come and visit.

✓ To see some waterfalls and sunshine, everyone must come and visit.

'Wheels' and 'sunshines' are incorrect word choices here. Likely intended 'waterfalls' or 'wonders' and 'sunshine' is uncountable (no plural). Use 'sunshine' and a correct attraction noun like 'waterfalls' or 'scenery.' This fixes word selection and plurality.