视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct basic grammar (e.g. singular/plural, verb forms) and avoid unclear phrases like “capture my movement” or “click a picture of you.”

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, when I visit a new place I often take photos to remember the experience, especially landscapes and interesting buildings. Also, I sometimes take candid shots of friends to capture moments together.

建議: Answer directly (state preference), then give specific reasons with linking words. Use correct vocabulary (rural, greenery) and improve sentence clarity and grammar. Limit to 2–4 sentences and avoid repetition.

範例: I prefer views in rural areas because there is abundant greenery and wildlife. For instance, I enjoy photographing fields, forests and animals, and the changing weather gives me varied scenes to capture. These peaceful views also help me relax and remember pleasant moments.

建議: Make a clear, direct statement of preference, then support it with specific, relevant reasons. Fix grammar (e.g. “every weather” → “the weather” or “different seasons”) and avoid vague expressions. Use linking words like “because” and “also.”

範例: I prefer views in my own country because I’m familiar with the places and I enjoy the changing seasons. For example, visiting local markets and eating traditional foods with family makes the scenes more meaningful to me, so I like to photograph those moments.

× I like taking picture of different views

✓ I like taking pictures of different views

The noun 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' because 'taking' with 'different views' implies multiple items. Use plural to match the plural noun 'views'. Suggestion: Use plural nouns when referring to more than one item: 'pictures'.

× so I click a picture to capture my movement and save memories

✓ so I take a picture to capture my movement and save memories

'Click' is informal and not incorrect grammatically, but in this context 'take' is the appropriate verb for making photographs. The problem list includes past participle but the core issue is wrong verb choice; replace 'click' with 'take' to fit standard usage. Suggestion: Use 'take a picture' or 'take pictures'.

× And when I show something new in anywhere so I click a picture of you

✓ And when I see something new anywhere I take a picture of it

'Show' is incorrect here; the speaker means 'see'. 'In anywhere' is wrong preposition and adverb order; use 'anywhere'. 'Click a picture of you' incorrectly uses 'you' instead of 'it'. Suggestion: Use 'see something new anywhere' and 'take a picture of it'.

× I prefer a view in ruler rulers area because there are so many green greeneries, trees and so many animals are there

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because there is so much greenery, trees, and many animals there

'Ruler rulers' is incorrect; correct word is 'rural'. 'A view' should be plural 'views' to match general preference. 'Green greeneries' is redundant; use 'greenery' (uncountable). Word order: 'there are so many ... are there' is awkward; use 'there is/are ... there' or omit final 'there'. Suggestion: Use 'rural areas' and 'greenery' for natural vegetation, and adjust pluralization and word order.

× So I capture so many picture of different view with different weather and I like to say well this memory and it's give me a comfort

✓ So I capture many pictures of different views in different weather, and I like to look back at these memories because they give me comfort

'Picture' and 'view' should be plural: 'pictures' and 'views'. 'Different weather' should be 'different weather' or 'different kinds of weather' and use preposition 'in'. 'I like to say well this memory' is ungrammatical; correct to 'I like to look back at these memories'. 'It's give me a comfort' has subject-verb agreement and article issues; use 'they give me comfort' (no article). Suggestion: Use plural nouns to match meaning, correct verb forms and natural expressions like 'look back at these memories' and 'give me comfort'.

× I saw my country school, I don't show any other countries view so I prefer my country's view because there every weathers are different, every weathers our views are change and we feel relaxed and we enjoy with specific foods and small time spend with family and friends

✓ I grew up in my country's towns and I don't often show views from other countries, so I prefer views from my country because the weather varies, the scenery changes, and we feel relaxed and enjoy specific foods and spending time with family and friends

This sentence has multiple structure errors: 'I saw my country school' is unclear; replaced with 'I grew up in my country's towns' to fit context. 'I don't show any other countries view' is awkward — corrected to 'I don't often show views from other countries'. 'Every weathers' is wrong plural and grammar; use 'the weather varies' or 'every season is different'. 'Every weathers our views are change' corrected to 'the scenery changes'. 'Enjoy with specific foods and small time spend' corrected to 'enjoy specific foods and spending time'. Suggestion: Break long sentences into clear clauses, use correct verb forms ('varies', 'changes'), and gerunds for activities ('spending').