视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (articles, plurals) and finish the thought so the answer is complete.

範例: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views because it helps me preserve memories. For example, I post landscape photos on my social media page to share with friends and attract followers, and I usually edit them to highlight colors before uploading.

建議: Open with a clear preference sentence, then give specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and correct small grammar errors (plural/singular, articles). Keep to two to three supporting points and one example.

範例: I prefer rural views because they are more natural and less crowded. For instance, in the countryside I can find open spaces to photograph sunrises and sunsets, which often produce dramatic light and colors, so I can take more striking pictures.

建議: State your preference clearly and then contrast it with the alternative. Use linking words (because, although, however) and reduce fillers like 'uh'. Give a specific reason and one example of a place or experience to make the answer concrete.

範例: I prefer photographing views in my own country because I am familiar with many locations and know the best times to shoot. However, I also enjoy exploring new cities abroad sometimes, for example I recently discovered a picturesque rooftop in a nearby town that offered a great cityscape at dusk.

× Yes, I like to take a picture of different views because I love to capture the memories and and I also love to share them on the Internet and I have a page on my social media so. So to gain follower, I always keep the.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because I love capturing memories, and I also enjoy sharing them on the Internet. I have a page on my social media, so to gain followers I always keep it updated.

This sentence has multiple issues but the primary error relates to verb + -ing form and related phrasing. Use 'like taking pictures' rather than 'like to take a picture' to indicate a general habitual preference and correct count with plural 'pictures'. Use gerunds 'capturing' and 'sharing' for parallel verbs after 'love'/'enjoy'. Fix 'follower' to plural 'followers' and complete the final clause with an object 'it' and verb 'updated'. Also remove duplicate 'and' and redundant short sentence fragments. Suggestion: use consistent parallel structure and correct noun plurality and complete clauses. Grammar problem type ID:8

× I prefer the views in a rural area because these views are are more natural in a rural areas and in and there I get a lot of empty spacer to capture the views like sunshine like sunrise or sunset views and I prefer the rural areas.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because they are more natural, and there I get a lot of empty space to capture scenes like sunrise or sunset. I prefer rural areas.

This sentence shows singular/plural mismatches and repeated words. Change 'the views in a rural area' to 'views in rural areas' for a general preference. Use 'they' to refer to 'views'. Correct 'areas' plural consistency and 'empty spacer' to 'empty space'. Remove duplicate words and unnecessary repetition. Suggestion: choose singular or plural consistently and avoid repeated phrases. Grammar problem type ID:1

× Uh, I prefer using my own country because, uh, I am a familiar with the lot of places and uh, at the same time I also, uh, love to explore the new cities.

✓ I prefer my own country because I am familiar with many places, and at the same time I also love to explore new cities.

The main pronoun/article errors: 'I am a familiar' is incorrect; use the adjective 'familiar' with 'I am familiar with'. Remove the unnecessary article 'the' before 'lot of places' and change to 'many places'. Remove 'using' after 'prefer' because 'prefer my own country' is more natural. Also drop 'the' before 'new cities'. Suggestion: use correct collocations ('familiar with', 'many places') and avoid unnecessary articles.