视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid unnecessary fillers, and use correct verb forms and articles. Provide one specific detail to support your reason and link sentences with a simple connector.

範例: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking photos because they help me preserve important memories. For example, I often photograph family gatherings and trips so I can look back and remember the happy moments.

建議: Make your response clearer and correct grammar and word choice. Begin with a direct preference statement, then add one or two specific reasons using linking words (for example, because, and). Avoid repetitions and unclear fragments.

範例: I prefer rural views. I like them because they feature forests and wildlife, which relax me and connect me to nature. For instance, walking in a quiet woodland helps me feel calm and inspired.

建議: Improve grammar (subject-verb agreement) and clarity. Give a concise main idea, then support it with specific examples of landscapes. Use linking words to organize your reasons and avoid repetition.

範例: I prefer the scenery in my own country because it offers a wide variety of landscapes. For example, we have vast plains, dense forests, and well-conserved natural parks, so I can enjoy different kinds of views close to home.

× Yes, because memories play essential role to me.

✓ Yes, because memories play an essential role for me.

Missing article and wrong preposition: 'role' needs the indefinite article 'an' and the common collocation is 'role for someone' or 'role in my life'. Correction: add 'an' and change 'to' to 'for' to form the natural phrase 'an essential role for me'. Suggestion: say 'memories play an essential role in my life' for an even more natural expression.

× I like to captured all the experiences that I have been through so that umm pictures can remind me of that happiness in my life.

✓ I like to capture all the experiences that I have been through so that pictures can remind me of that happiness in my life.

Incorrect verb form: 'to captured' is wrong because after 'to' the base form is required ('to capture'). Also 'umm' is a filler and can be removed. The rest ('have been through') is present perfect and fits the context. Suggestion: use 'to capture' and omit fillers.

× It makes me it's remind me that for of the forest and the animals, which plays a huge role in my life.

✓ It makes me remember the forests and the animals, which play a huge role in my life.

Multiple issues: 'it makes me it's remind me' mixes pronoun and clause structures; use 'make someone remember' followed by the object. 'forest' should be plural 'forests' to match general meaning, and 'animals' is plural so the relative clause verb must be plural: 'play' not 'plays'. Suggestion: simplify to 'It makes me remember the forests and the animals, which play a huge role in my life.'

× I would say I prefer the scenery in my own country because it have a great types of it have a great varieties of types of landscapes which you can view like the far, the dense forest and also conserved.

✓ I would say I prefer the scenery in my own country because it has a great variety of landscapes you can see, such as the coast, dense forests, and protected areas.

Subject-verb agreement and word choice errors: 'it have' is incorrect — use 'it has' for third-person singular ('it' refers to 'my country' or 'the country'). Redundant and ungrammatical phrase 'a great types of it have a great varieties of types of landscapes' should be simplified to 'a great variety of landscapes'. 'the far' is unclear; 'the coast' or 'the countryside' is more natural. 'conserved' should be a noun phrase like 'protected areas'. Suggestion: use 'has a great variety of landscapes you can see, such as the coast, dense forests, and protected areas.'