视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words like "umm," and use correct verb forms and pluralization. Add one specific example to make the answer more vivid. Keep the response within 2–4 sentences and use a linking phrase when adding reasons.

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of many things, such as animals, people and landscapes. For example, I often photograph birds in the park because watching the photos later helps me feel calm and remember pleasant moments.

建議: Clarify and correct sentence structure, use singular/plural consistently, and connect ideas with linking words. Give a brief reason or a specific image to support your preference. Limit to 2–3 concise sentences.

範例: I prefer rural areas because the scenery is calmer and more peaceful. For instance, I like watching the sea and mountains since their quiet atmosphere is very different from the busy streets of my hometown.

建議: Avoid hesitations and run-on sentences. State your preference clearly, then briefly explain why using a linking word (e.g., "because" or "although"). Use correct verb forms and adjectives (e.g., "exciting" → "excited"). Add a short specific comparison to strengthen your answer.

範例: I prefer views in other countries because they often look very different from what I'm used to at home. Although my hometown is beautiful, seeing unfamiliar landscapes abroad makes me feel excited and curious.

× Yes, I enjoy taking picture of everything such as animals, people and including sceneries.

✓ Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of everything, such as animals, people, and scenery.

The noun 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' because 'everything' implies multiple items (Grammar problem type ID 14: Incorrect use of quantifiers / singular and plural). 'Sceneries' is uncountable in this context; use 'scenery' as a collective noun. Also add commas to separate items for clarity.

× Umm it's make me feel calm and when I think about it I can open it and look at the memories.

✓ Umm it makes me feel calm, and when I think about them I can look at the memories.

Use 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'it' (Grammar problem type ID 27: Subject-verb agreement / Third person singular). 'Look at the memories' is fine, but 'it' referring to multiple pictures is inconsistent; change to 'them' to match plural 'pictures'. Remove 'open it' unless referring to a specific album; 'look at the memories' is clearer.

× I enjoy looking at the sea, mountain and ocean is quite calm and peaceful and different from my hometown.

✓ I enjoy looking at the sea, the mountains, and the ocean; they are quite calm and peaceful and different from my hometown.

List items need correct plurality and articles: use 'mountains' (plural) or 'the mountain' consistently. Also join with proper punctuation and ensure verb agreement: 'they are' refers to the listed places (Grammar problem type ID 1). Adding 'the' before geographical features is natural here.

× I like the views of other countries, it doesn't mean umm the view in my hometown is not beautiful but in other countries it's different and give me feel exciting about the sceneries.

✓ I like the views of other countries. That doesn't mean the views in my hometown are not beautiful, but in other countries they are different and make me feel excited about the scenery.

Run-on sentence fixed into two sentences. Replace 'it' with 'That' to start a new clause. 'View' should be plural 'views' to match 'my hometown' and 'they are' for plural agreement (Grammar problem type ID 12: Incorrect use of pronouns and ID 1: Singular and plural issue). 'Give me feel exciting' is incorrect; use 'make me feel excited' (Grammar problem type ID 13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs). 'Sceneries' should be 'scenery' as an uncountable noun.