视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: حاول أن تجعل إجابتك أكثر طبيعية وتنظيمًا. ابدأ بجملة مباشرة توضح موقفك بوضوح، ثم قدم سببًا أو مثالًا قصيرًا. تجنب التردد والكلمات غير الضرورية. ركّب جملة كاملة وصحيحة نحويًا (مثلاً: "Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because...").

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because it helps me notice small details I would otherwise miss. For example, I often photograph city skylines at sunset and close-ups of interesting textures.

建議: حسّن الربط بين الجملة الأولى والتفاصيل التالية باستخدام رابط يوضّح لماذا تفضّل الطبيعة. أضف جملة أو جملتين تشرح السبب وتصف نوع المشاهد الطبيعية التي تفضلها، مع استخدام كلمات وصفية مناسبة.

範例: I prefer rural and natural views because I love open spaces and greenery. For instance, I enjoy mountain landscapes and quiet lakesides where the scenery feels peaceful and varied.

建議: تجنّب الكلمات غير المناسبة والأخطاء في المفردات (مثلاً "refuse" خطأ — استخدم "natural scenery" أو "natural landscapes"). قدّم جملة واضحة تشرح المقارنة وأذكر أمثلة محددة لما يعجبك في مناظر دول أخرى مع ربط منطقي. قلل التردّد واصغِ جمل كاملة وصحيحة.

範例: I prefer views in other countries because Saudi Arabia has fewer natural landscapes that I enjoy. For example, I would love to photograph the forests and lakes in Canada and the diverse national parks across the United States.

× Sometimes I would like to take a picture from different angle.

✓ Sometimes I would like to take pictures from different angles.

The noun 'picture' should be plural because the speaker refers to taking photos in general; this is a pluralization issue best addressed by using the plural noun 'pictures' and 'angles'. Also 'from different angle' needs 'different angles' for natural English. Suggestion: use 'pictures' and 'angles' when speaking about multiple instances. Grammar Problem Type ID: 1

× I live in Saudi Arabia, there is not a lot of uh, natural refuse.

✓ I live in Saudi Arabia; there is not a lot of natural scenery.

The phrase 'a lot of' should be followed by an uncountable noun or a plural countable noun. 'Refuse' means garbage and is countable/uncountable but is not appropriate here. The intended meaning is 'scenery' which is uncountable. Also the original has a comma splice; replace with a semicolon or separate sentence. Suggestion: use 'not a lot of natural scenery' or 'not many natural landscapes.' Grammar Problem Type ID: 1

× So I prefer from different country like Canada, like uh, United States.

✓ So I prefer countries like Canada and the United States.

The structure 'prefer from different country' is incorrect. 'Prefer' should be followed by the object (what is preferred): 'countries like...'. Also use the definite article 'the' with 'United States'. Suggestion: say 'I prefer countries like Canada and the United States.' Grammar Problem Type ID: 11},{