视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Reduce repetition and make the answer clearer and more natural. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Use correct verb forms and prepositions, and avoid redundant words like repeating “collect.”

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they help me preserve memories. For example, when I look at landscape photos from trips I can remember where I was and what I felt at that moment.

建議: Remove fillers (uh, umm) and reduce repetitions. Begin with a clear topic sentence stating the preference, then give specific reasons with linking words (for example, because, such as). Use correct subject-verb agreement and plural forms.

範例: I prefer rural views because I enjoy natural environments. For example, I like seeing fields of flowers and wildlife, which feel peaceful and lively compared with busy city streets.

建議: Clarify the final point and avoid stuttering/repetition. State your preference clearly, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words (because, so, for example). Replace vague phrases like “any others I'm so fam” with precise ideas such as “I am familiar with.”

範例: I prefer views in other countries because I want to discover new landscapes and architectures. For example, I haven’t seen many European old towns or Asian temples, so traveling abroad lets me see things I’m not familiar with at home.

× Sure, because I think this is a good way to collect collect my memories and I can recall the constant in every time by looking for the photos.

✓ Sure, because I think this is a good way to collect my memories and I can recall the moments every time by looking at the photos.

There are two issues: repeated word 'collect' (typo) and incorrect verb/preposition choices. 'Collect' is correctly used but repeated; keep one. 'Collect my memories' is acceptable, but more natural is 'collect memories' or 'collect my memories.' 'Recall the constant in every time' is ungrammatical: likely intended 'recall the moments every time' or 'recall what happened each time.' Use the noun 'moments' and the phrase 'every time' after the verb. Also use the preposition 'looking at the photos' (not 'looking for'). These corrections address verb + -ing and preposition usage; main listed type is Verb + -ing form because 'looking for' vs 'looking at' involves gerund/preposition choice and verb form use. Suggestion: proofread to remove repeated words and choose correct collocations like 'look at photos' and 'recall moments.'

× To be honest, I prefer rural areas and views, umm, because I, I like natural environment.

✓ To be honest, I prefer rural areas and views because I like the natural environment.

The phrase 'natural environment' needs a definite article 'the' when referring to the environment in general in this context: 'I like the natural environment.' Also remove filler repeats and punctuation for clarity. The error maps to subject-verb agreement/usage category because article use affects noun phrase agreement with the verb; primary listed type here is Subject-verb agreement errors (27) though article error (22) also applies; following instructions, choose one matching type. Suggestion: include appropriate articles ('the') with singular noun phrases that refer to a specific concept: 'the natural environment.'

× I like, uh, plants and flowers and uh, any other animals.

✓ I like plants, flowers, and animals.

The phrase 'any other animals' is unnecessary and awkward; use the plural 'animals' to match 'plants' and 'flowers.' The original mixes determiners and pluralization awkwardly. This is a singular/plural issue because 'any other animals' implies comparison but is redundant. Suggestion: list items in parallel using plural nouns and simple conjunctions: 'plants, flowers, and animals.'

× Uh, I think, uh, the, the views is very lively.

✓ I think the views are very lively.

'Views' is plural, so the verb must be 'are' not 'is.' This is a clear subject-verb agreement error. Also remove filler words and duplicate 'the.' Suggestion: ensure the verb agrees in number with the subject: plural subjects take plural verbs (views -> are).

× I prefer views in other countries because I think there there are so many views I haven't seen and in in my own country the the the building styles and the any others I'm so fam.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because I think there are so many places I haven't seen, and in my own country the building styles and other sights are familiar to me.

Multiple problems: repeated words and fillers remove clarity. 'There there are' should be 'there are.' 'So many views I haven't seen' is awkward; 'so many places I haven't seen' is more natural. The clause 'the building styles and the any others I'm so fam' is ungrammatical; correct to 'the building styles and other sights are familiar to me.' The key grammatical issue is subject-verb agreement (ensure 'building styles and other sights are'), and noun choice (views -> places/sights). Suggestion: remove repetitions, choose correct noun collocations ('places' or 'sights'), and ensure verbs agree with plural subjects.