视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is natural and relevant, with clear reasons. To improve, make sentences more concise, correct minor grammar (e.g., 'sceneries' -> 'scenery', 'in daily lives' -> 'in daily life'), and use one linking phrase to connect ideas. Also vary vocabulary slightly (e.g., 'memories' or 'moments').

範例: I do — I love taking photos of scenery when I travel and in daily life because they help me remember special moments. For example, I often photograph sunsets and city streets, then share the best shots on social media so friends can see them and I can look back later.

建議: Good attempt to present a balanced opinion, but there are grammatical errors and awkward phrasing (e.g., 'humans has gone', 'terraforming what nature provided become'). Keep answers concise (max 4–5 sentences), use clear linking words like 'however' to contrast, and give a specific example to support your preference.

範例: I like both, but for different reasons. In rural areas I enjoy bathing in warm sunlight and the peaceful atmosphere; however, urban views fascinate me because of impressive architecture and technological advances. For example, I admire how modern skyline designs reflect human creativity and engineering.

建議: Good content and enthusiasm, but refine grammar and phrasing ('Gothic architectures' -> 'Gothic architecture', 'the different type of people' -> 'different kinds of people'). Add a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting details or an example, and avoid vague attributions like 'probably due to Western influence' unless you explain it.

範例: I prefer views in other countries, especially Europe. I find Gothic architecture and historic cityscapes breathtaking, and I enjoy encountering diverse cultures and people that feel very different from those at home. For example, visiting a medieval cathedral in Europe made me appreciate the craftsmanship and history behind those views.

× I love capturing different sceneries whenever I travel or in daily lives.

✓ I love capturing different scenes whenever I travel or in daily life.

'Scenery' is an uncountable noun in English, so 'sceneries' is incorrect; use 'scenes' (countable) or 'scenery' (uncountable). Also 'in daily lives' is unnatural; use 'in daily life' to refer to everyday situations in general. Suggestion: Use 'scenes' for multiple views or 'scenery' to speak generally, and 'daily life' for ordinary routine.

× These photos will remind me of the special moment and what I have experienced.

✓ These photos will remind me of the special moments and what I have experienced.

The sentence uses 'the special moment' but speaks generally about photos reminding of multiple occasions; plural 'moments' fits better. The tense usage ('will remind' and 'have experienced') is acceptable, but pluralization was inconsistent. Suggestion: Use plural 'moments' when referring to more than one occasion.

× I also share these photos on social media for my friends and for me to review them later.

✓ I also share these photos on social media for my friends and for me to review later.

The phrase 'for me to review them later' is wordy and repeats the object 'them'. Removing 'them' yields a natural infinitive phrase 'for me to review later.' Suggestion: Avoid unnecessary repetition of pronouns when the object is clear.

× A bit of both actually.

✓ A bit of both, actually.

This is a punctuation/style improvement rather than strict grammar; adding a comma after 'both' makes the sentence flow naturally in speech. Suggestion: Use a comma before 'actually' when it is an interjection.

× I really enjoy the feeling of bathing in the sunlight, but on the other hand I also like the urban city landscape because it reminds me how far humans has gone to improve our lives using technology and terraforming what nature provided become.

✓ I really enjoy the feeling of bathing in the sunlight, but I also like the urban city landscape because it reminds me how far humans have gone to improve our lives using technology and to transform what nature provided.

Multiple issues: 'on the other hand' is redundant after 'but' and can be omitted. Subject-verb agreement error 'humans has' should be 'humans have' (humans plural). 'Terraforming what nature provided become' is ungrammatical: 'terraforming' is misused and 'become' is incorrect. Use 'to transform what nature provided' or 'to alter what nature provided.' Also 'urban city landscape' is wordy; 'city landscape' or 'urban landscape' is preferable. Suggestion: Use 'have' with plural subjects, avoid redundant phrases, and use correct verb forms ('to transform' not 'become'). Consider revising 'urban city landscape' to 'urban landscape'.

× As a Taiwanese, I prefer views in foreign countries, especially those in Europe, probably due to Western influence.

✓ As a Taiwanese person, I prefer views in foreign countries, especially those in Europe, probably due to Western influence.

The phrase 'As a Taiwanese' is colloquially acceptable, but adding 'person' is clearer and more natural in formal speech. This is a minor style/article choice rather than strict grammar. Suggestion: Use 'Taiwanese person' for clarity in formal contexts.

× But I really do enjoy the Gothic architectures, the diverse cultures and the different type of people I see only in movies and that is just fantastic and breathtaking.

✓ But I really do enjoy Gothic architecture, the diverse cultures, and the different types of people I see only in movies; it is just fantastic and breathtaking.

'Gothic architectures' is incorrect: 'architecture' as a field or style is uncountable, so use 'Gothic architecture.' 'Different type of people' should be 'different types of people' (plural agreement). The sentence is long and needs punctuation; replace 'and that is' with 'it is' or use a semicolon. Suggestion: Use uncountable nouns for styles ('architecture'), ensure plural agreement for 'types,' and break long sentences for clarity.