视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Mejora la fluidez y la gramática; evita muletillas (umm, uh) y usa oraciones completas. Empieza con una oración temática clara, añade detalles específicos sobre qué te gusta fotografiar y usa conectores breves para mayor claridad. Por ejemplo, corrige tiempos verbales y pluralización y añade una razón o ejemplo concreto.

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different places. For example, when I travel with my children and my mother, I like to photograph landscapes and local markets because they show the daily life and colors of the area.

建議: Corrige la gramática y la elección de palabras; usa una frase temática y luego explica con detalles específicos y un conector. Evita traducciones literales (ej.: "your beauty") y di por qué te atraen las zonas rurales usando vocabulario relevante (paisaje, tranquilidad, comida típica).

範例: I prefer rural areas because I enjoy the peaceful landscapes and traditional food. For example, visiting my small hometown allows me to photograph green hills and family-run markets where the local cuisine is tasty and authentic.

建議: Mejora la estructura y la gramática: usa una oración clara sobre tu preferencia y añade detalles específicos que justifiquen tu elección. Evita errores de concordancia y pronombres incorrectos ("you it's"). Añade ejemplos concretos sobre lugares, cultura o gente que sean buenos motivos para fotografiar.

範例: I prefer the views in my own country, Ecuador, because it has diverse scenery and rich culture. For example, the Andes mountains, Amazon rainforest, and colorful local festivals provide excellent opportunities for photography and interacting with friendly people.

× Yes, umm, enjoy uh, taking picture of different place. For example, uh, when, when I travel with my children and my mom.

✓ Yes, um, I enjoy taking pictures of different places, for example when I travel with my children and my mom.

Use of gerund after enjoy is correct but the original omitted the subject and used singular nouns incorrectly. Add the subject I, use the gerund form enjoy + taking, pluralize picture to pictures and place to places, remove extra fillers and commas for clarity. Suggestion: Always include the subject before the verb and match count (plural) for general references.

× I'm enjoying the rural areas because I like travel ho small hometown and because your food is very delicious and your beauty is very nice.

✓ I enjoy rural areas because I like to travel to small hometowns, and because the food is very delicious and the scenery is very nice.

Use simple present (I enjoy) for habitual preferences instead of present continuous (I'm enjoying). Use infinitive 'to travel' and include preposition to before destinations. Change 'small hometown' to plural 'small hometowns' for general statement. Replace 'your food' and 'your beauty' with 'the food' and 'the scenery' to refer generally; 'beauty' is vague so 'scenery' is clearer. Suggestion: Use simple present for regular likes, use correct prepositions and choose specific nouns.

× I am prefer the views of Ecuador. My country is very beautiful in views and you it's culture and people is very nice for photography.

✓ I prefer the views of Ecuador. My country has very beautiful scenery and its culture and people are very nice for photography.

Do not use 'am' with prefer; use simple present 'I prefer'. 'Beautiful in views' is incorrect; use 'beautiful scenery' or 'beautiful views'. Replace 'you it's culture' with 'its culture' (possessive pronoun). Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'culture and people are' (plural). Suggestion: Use correct verb forms (no auxiliary 'am' with stative verbs like prefer), use possessive pronouns correctly, and make subjects and verbs agree.