视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Отвечайте более связно и избегайте повторов и пауз с «uh». Начните с простой темы, затем добавьте одно-два конкретных пояснения. Используйте связующие слова (for example, because, and) и конкретные детали (какие виды, что вы замечаете). Ограничьте ответ до 2–4 предложений.

範例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because photography helps me notice small details. For example, I often photograph city skylines at sunset and natural landscapes to capture colors and textures.

建議: Не отвечайте односложно; даже если вы не уверены, дайте мнение и объясните его. Начните с прямого ответа (I prefer... or I’m not sure, but...) и добавьте причину и пример. Поддержите ответ связующим словом (because, although).

範例: I prefer rural areas because they are quieter and the air is fresher, which makes photos look more peaceful. However, I sometimes like urban views for their interesting architecture and busy atmosphere.

建議: Дайте чёткий выбор (own country or other countries) и объясните причину последовательно. Избегайте бессвязных фраз и исправьте грамматику; используйте связки (because, so, where) и конкретику (почему спокойнее, примеры мест). Держите 2–3 предложения.

範例: I prefer views in my own country because I enjoy walking in places with fresh air and fewer cars. For example, I like photographing quiet countryside paths and lakes because they feel calm and relaxing.

× Yes, I like, I like taking pictures of different views because any uh they uh, uh beautiful or photography helps me notice details.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because they are beautiful and photography helps me notice details.

The original sentence has extra filler words and incorrect structure. 'they are beautiful' uses the present form of 'be' with the plural subject 'they' (correct present simple). Also remove redundant 'I like' and unclear 'any' and 'or'. Suggestion: simplify the sentence, keep 'taking pictures' (verb + -ing) after 'like' and use 'they are beautiful' to describe 'views'. Grammar issue: misuse related to present participle phrase placement and sentence structure; ensure 'taking pictures' correctly follows 'like' and use correct verb 'are' for 'they'.

× I don't know.

✓ I don't mind./I have no preference.

The examiner asked a preference question. 'I don't know' is grammatically correct but unnatural here. Use present tense expressions that convey lack of preference. Suggestion: use 'I don't mind' or 'I have no preference' to answer suitability in present tense.

× Yes, I because uh, I think enjoy walking in preferred views and where the air in fresh and they are for cars. Umm, so it feels much calmer than the city.

✓ Yes, because I enjoy walking in preferred places where the air is fresh and there are fewer cars, so it feels much calmer than the city.

The original contains fragmented clauses, missing words, incorrect word order and incorrect plural agreement. Corrections: place 'because' before the reason, use 'I enjoy' (present simple) with the gerund 'walking', replace 'views' with 'places' for naturalness, use 'where the air is fresh' (correct verb 'is' with singular noun 'air'), and 'there are fewer cars' (existential 'there are' and comparative 'fewer' for countable plural). Also combine clauses with commas for clarity. Suggestion: practice forming complete clauses, use 'there are' for existence, and use 'fewer' with countable nouns.