视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 문장이 자연스럽고 직접적으로 질문에 답했지만, 문법 오류와 중복 표현이 있습니다. 특히 ‘I like taking pictures of different views’가 반복되고, ‘that I want taking a picture of that’는 문법적으로 부정확합니다. 또한 구체적 예시(어떤 건물 구조? 어떤 그림자?)가 부족합니다. 개선을 위해 문장을 간결하게 만들고, 연결어를 사용해 이유와 구체적 예시를 덧붙이세요. 예: 주어+동사로 시작한 주제문 → 이유/설명 → 구체적 예시 순서로 2~4문장으로 말하세요.

範例: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different views, especially on sunny days. I’m fascinated by the sharp shadows and architectural lines of buildings because they create strong contrasts. For example, I often photograph the facades of old city buildings where the sunlight highlights textures and patterns.

建議: 답변이 직접적이지만 어색한 문장 구조와 불완전한 문장이 있습니다(예: ‘I usually prefer the views’는 모호하고 ‘Like trees or mountains and.’은 문장이 끝나지 않았음). 감정이나 이유를 더 구체적으로 설명하고, 연결어를 사용해 문장을 완성하세요. 예: 주제문(도시/시골 선호) → 이유(분위기, 소리, 경치 등) → 구체적 예시로 마무리.

範例: It depends on my mood, but I generally prefer rural views because they feel peaceful. The natural surroundings, like forests and mountains, help me relax and focus. For instance, I love walking along quiet country trails and taking photos of misty tree lines in the morning.

建議: 의도를 전달하려 했지만 문장 충돌과 문법 오류(예: ‘Jeju island have’, ‘that I have ever seen’, ‘It's ocean and mountains looks’)가 있습니다. 답변을 더 간결히 정리하고, 비교와 이유를 명확히 제시하세요. 또한 하나의 구체적 예시(제주도의 어떤 장소, 장면)를 넣어 생동감을 더하세요.

範例: I enjoy views both at home and abroad, but my favorite place is Jeju Island in Korea. Jeju combines dramatic coastlines and volcanic mountains, which creates stunning scenery. For example, I love the view from Seongsan Ilchulbong where you can see the sunrise over the sea and the rugged crater at the same time.

× I like sunny days and the shadow and structure of buildings is my favorite object that I want taking a picture of that.

✓ I like sunny days, and the shadows and structures of buildings are my favorite subjects to photograph.

The sentence has pronoun and noun-number errors: 'shadow and structure' should be plural 'shadows and structures' to match general reference; 'is' should be 'are' for plural subject (subject-verb agreement). 'Object that I want taking a picture of that' is ungrammatical: use 'subjects to photograph'. Improve by using plural nouns for general statements and a passive infinitive phrase 'to photograph' for intent.'

× It depends on my moods of the day, but I usually prefer the views.

✓ It depends on my mood that day, but I usually prefer certain views.

'moods of the day' is awkward; use singular 'mood' for general state and 'that day' for specific time. Also 'the views' is vague; 'certain views' or 'different views' fits context. Keep present simple for habits.'

× In rural areas I like the environment. Like trees or mountains and.

✓ In rural areas I like the environment, such as trees and mountains.

Fragment 'Like trees or mountains and.' is incomplete. Combine into one sentence using 'such as' and remove trailing 'and'. This fixes sentence structure and yields a complete thought.'

× Jeju island have beautiful views that I have ever seen.

✓ Jeju Island has the most beautiful views I have ever seen.

Proper noun 'Jeju Island' is singular so use 'has' not 'have'. To express highest degree, use 'the most beautiful views I have ever seen.' This corrects subject-verb agreement and clarifies meaning.'

× It's ocean and mountains looks.

✓ You can see the ocean and the mountains.

'It's ocean and mountains looks.' is ungrammatical: 'It's' does not fit and 'looks' misused. Rephrase to a clear description: 'You can see the ocean and the mountains' or 'It has ocean and mountain views.' This corrects adjective/adverb misuse and yields a natural sentence.'