视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it has minor grammar errors and could be slightly more natural and varied. Correct 'let me feel relaxed' to 'makes me feel relaxed' and avoid listing too many items without cohesion. Add a brief reason or an example to enrich the answer and use one linking phrase.

範例: Yes, I enjoy photographing different landscapes because it helps me relax. For example, I often take pictures of mountain ranges at sunrise to capture the calm colors, which makes me feel peaceful.

建議: Good direct response, but phrasing and cohesion need improvement. Replace 'breathing the fresh air' with 'breathing fresh air' and use a linking word such as 'because' to connect reason. Avoid hedging phrases like 'I think' when stating a clear preference. Provide a specific example to support your preference.

範例: I prefer rural areas because I enjoy breathing fresh air and seeing wide-open fields. For instance, when I visit the countryside I like to walk among wildflowers and photograph them without the distraction of tall buildings.

建議: Your answer covers both options, but it is slightly disorganized and contains awkward phrases like 'both of all' and 'including ... and so on.' Start with a clear topic sentence ('I like both') then give one specific example for China and one for abroad, using linking words like 'for example' and 'however.'

範例: I like views both in my country and abroad. For example, in China I enjoy photographing its diverse mountains and lakes, while abroad I would love to visit Northern Europe to see and photograph the spectacular Aurora Borealis, which I cannot see at home.

× It let me feel relaxed.

✓ It lets me feel relaxed.

Subject-verb agreement: the subject 'It' is third-person singular, so the verb should be in the third-person singular form 'lets' rather than base form 'let'. Use present simple to match the habitual context shown by previous sentence.

× I really enjoy breathing the fresh air, watching some beautiful flowers, while in urban areas I think there are also tall buildings so I cannot see the green spaces.

✓ I really enjoy breathing the fresh air and watching beautiful flowers, but in urban areas there are also tall buildings so I cannot see green spaces.

Conjunction and preposition use: 'while' can be used but here 'but' contrasts more naturally. 'Watching some beautiful flowers' is better without 'some' for general preference. Remove 'the' before 'green spaces' unless referring to specific spaces; use plural without article. Also join parallel activities with 'and'.

× Actually, both of all, in China, I think there are a lot of beautiful sceneries, including mountains, lakes and so on.

✓ Actually, both, and in China I think there are a lot of beautiful scenery spots, including mountains and lakes.

Awkward phrase 'both of all' is incorrect; use 'both' alone when referring to two options. 'Scenery' is an uncountable noun, so 'a lot of beautiful sceneries' is incorrect; use 'scenery' or 'scenery spots' or 'beautiful places'. Also remove unnecessary 'and so on' for clarity.

× Well, I really want to go to the Northern Europe and see the spectacular Aurora, which I cannot see in China.

✓ Well, I really want to go to Northern Europe and see the spectacular aurora, which I cannot see in China.

Article use: 'Northern Europe' does not need 'the' before it. 'Aurora' as a phenomenon is usually lowercased in general usage; keep consistent capitalization. The modal 'cannot' is acceptable here. Adjusting the article fixes the geographic reference.