视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Focus on clear grammar and concise content. Start with a direct topic sentence (Yes/No), correct verb forms, and one specific supporting detail. Use linking words if adding reasons or examples. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

範例: To be honest, I don't like taking pictures very much. However, I enjoy visiting beautiful places and sometimes take photos when I travel, for example during a trip to Italy where I took photos of historic streets. These photos help me remember the trip.

建議: Give a clear preference and one or two specific reasons. Use correct sentence structure and linking words (because, however, on the other hand). Avoid confusing fragments and keep to 2–3 sentences.

範例: I prefer views in urban areas because I like the vibrant streets and architecture. However, I also appreciate rural scenery for its peacefulness, especially when I visit the countryside for a weekend.

建議: State your preference clearly and support it with a specific example. Use past tense correctly when describing past trips and include a linking phrase (for example, for instance, because) to connect ideas. Keep responses natural and concise.

範例: I prefer views in other countries because they offer different cultures and landscapes. For example, when I visited Turkey I explored rural villages and unique coastlines, which was a very memorable experience.

× To be honest, I don't like take picture, but I like to you to some very beautiful places.

✓ To be honest, I don't like taking pictures, but I would like you to take me to some very beautiful places.

The verb 'like' followed by another verb requires the -ing form (gerund): 'like taking'. 'Take picture' needs plural 'pictures'. The phrase 'I like to you to some very beautiful places' is ungrammatical: likely intended 'I would like you to take me to some very beautiful places' using 'would like' plus object and infinitive. Suggestion: use 'like taking pictures' and 'would like you to take me to' for correct structure.

× When I was in different countries, I take a photo but not take picture because it's very hard for me.

✓ When I was in different countries, I took a photo but did not take many pictures because it was very hard for me.

The clause refers to past time ('When I was...') so verbs must be in past tense: 'take' -> 'took' and 'do not' -> 'did not'. Also 'take picture' should be plural 'take many pictures' or 'take pictures'. Use 'was' for 'it was very hard'. Suggestion: keep past tense consistency and use plural 'pictures' with quantifier.

× Yes, urban areas, it's very more close for me because it's in it.

✓ Yes, urban areas; they are much closer to me because I live there.

The student mixes singular/plural and incorrect tense/structure. 'Urban areas' is plural so use 'they are' not 'it's'. 'Very more close' is ungrammatical; use 'much closer'. 'Because it's in it' is unclear; likely meant 'because I live there' or 'because they are close to me'. Suggestion: match subject number, use comparative 'closer' with 'much', and provide clear reason phrase.

× Show me other people's.

✓ They show me other people's places.

The fragment lacks a clear verb and object. If intended meaning is that urban areas 'show' other people's lives or 'show me other people's places', include 'places' and correct verb form. Also possessive 'other people's' must be followed by a noun. Suggestion: complete the noun phrase, e.g., 'they show me other people's places' or 'I can see other people's lives'.

× But in on other hand, a rural area sites.

✓ But on the other hand, rural areas have their own attractions.

Use fixed expression 'on the other hand' not 'in on other hand'. 'a rural area sites' is incorrect: 'sites' as a noun needs context; better to say 'rural areas have their own attractions' or 'rural areas are quieter'. Suggestion: use 'on the other hand' and rephrase to a complete clause about rural areas.

× I think that I more I prefer more views in other countries because it's very different experience for me.

✓ I think I prefer views in other countries because it is a very different experience for me.

Redundant 'I more I prefer more' should be simplified to 'I prefer'. Use 'it is' or contraction 'it's' and include article 'a' before 'very different experience'. Maintain present simple for general preference. Suggestion: remove redundancy and add the article 'a'.

× For example, when I was in Turkey, I look for different places, umm, rural places.

✓ For example, when I was in Turkey, I looked for different places, umm, rural places.

The time clause 'when I was in Turkey' indicates past, so the verb 'look' should be past 'looked'. Keep tense consistent in the sentence. Suggestion: use past tense 'looked' for actions that occurred during that visit.