视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and avoid hesitations and tense errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details with appropriate tense and a linking word. Limit to 3–4 sentences and replace filler words (uh) with pauses if needed.

範例: Yes, I do. Photography is one of my hobbies, so when I travel I take many photos to capture the scenery and my feelings. For example, I photograph sunsets and local markets to remember the atmosphere and share memories with friends.

建議: Give a direct answer first, then support it with a clear, specific reason and use a linking word. Correct small grammar issues (a urban -> an urban area; I can see in the urban -> I can't see in the city). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

範例: I prefer rural views. Because I live in a city, I enjoy the countryside for its fresh air, open fields and rivers, which I rarely see in urban areas.

建議: Answer directly and avoid repeating phrases. Use correct conditional structure and clearer vocabulary (motherland -> home country; expand my horizon -> broaden my horizons). Provide one concise reason and one brief example. Keep sentences grammatically correct.

範例: I prefer views in other countries when I am at home because travelling abroad helps me broaden my horizons. For instance, seeing architecture and landscapes in another country gives me new perspectives compared to familiar local scenery.

× So when I, for example, for uh, when I traveling, I like to take many photos for different views to record what I see, uh, what I saw and what I felt.

✓ So when I, for example, travel, I like to take many photos of different views to record what I see, what I saw, and what I felt.

Error type 8: incorrect use of verb + -ing. The phrase 'when I traveling' omits the auxiliary and should be 'when I travel' (simple present after 'when' for habitual actions). Also 'take many photos for different views' misuses preposition 'for' (use 'of' for photos of views). Suggestions: use 'when I travel' for habitual actions, use 'photos of' to indicate subject of photos, and keep parallel verb forms 'see, saw, and felt'. Note: keep tenses consistent for habitual and past experiences.

× Then I can remind them in the future.

✓ Then I can remind myself in the future.

Error type 11 and 12: 'remind them' is incorrect because 'them' does not refer to a clear plural object; the speaker intends to recall memories, so the reflexive pronoun 'myself' or phrase 'remind me of them' is needed. Suggestion: use 'remind myself' to indicate the speaker will recall their memories, or 'remind me of them' to refer to the photos/memories.

× For now I live in a urban.

✓ For now I live in an urban area.

Error type 22: article error. 'Urban' begins with a vowel sound when used as an adjective before a noun and requires 'an' not 'a'. Also 'urban' is usually followed by a noun such as 'area' or 'city'. Suggestion: use 'an urban area' or simply 'in a city'.

× I live in a city so I prefer the rural views because in the countryside or my hometown it has fresh air and some rivers that I can see in the urban.

✓ I live in a city, so I prefer rural views because the countryside or my hometown has fresh air and some rivers that I don't see in the city.

Error type 11 and 26: incorrect preposition and sentence structure. 'in the countryside or my hometown it has fresh air' is ungrammatical; use subject 'the countryside' with verb 'has'. Also 'that I can see in the urban' is incorrect: use 'don't see in the city' to contrast. Suggestions: structure the sentence clearly with subject-verb agreement and appropriate contrast words ('don't').

× Actually it also depends on where I live in.

✓ Actually, it also depends on where I live.

Error type 6: unnecessary preposition 'in' at the end. 'Where I live' already expresses location. Suggestion: remove redundant 'in' for correct present-tense expression.

× If I stay in my motherland, I will appreciate to look other views in the other countries because I want to, I want to expand my horizon and if I live in a foreign countries.

✓ If I stay in my motherland, I will appreciate seeing other views in other countries because I want to expand my horizons; also if I live in a foreign country, ...

Multiple errors: article error (use 'a foreign country' singular or 'foreign countries' plural without 'a'); verb pattern error ('appreciate seeing' not 'appreciate to look'); plural/singular and phrasing ('other views in the other countries' -> 'other views in other countries'). Suggestions: use 'appreciate seeing', use 'other countries' without 'the' unless specific, 'expand my horizons' is the idiomatic phrase, and keep consistent singular/plural ('a foreign country' or 'foreign countries').