视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make your response clearer and more natural by using a direct topic sentence, correct grammar, and specific reasons. Avoid vague phrases and redundancy. For example, start with a clear statement (Yes/No) then give 1–2 specific reasons using correct verbs and noun forms, and link them with a connector like because or so. Keep it to no more than 3 sentences.

範例: Yes, I do. I like photographing the same subject from different angles because it reveals details and creates more interesting compositions. For example, a tree shot from below looks dramatic, while a side view shows its shape.

建議: Your answer is relevant but needs more natural phrasing, correct grammar, and a clearer structure. Begin with a concise topic sentence, follow with a specific reason, and use linking words for coherence. Replace awkward phrases like “in deep pictures” with clearer descriptions (e.g., “in close-up shots” or “in landscape photos”).

範例: I prefer photographing rural areas because they offer more natural subjects and peaceful scenes. For instance, in close-up or landscape shots I can capture birds, wildflowers and old trees, which give my photos more character.

建議: This answer has many grammar and word-choice errors and is hard to follow. Use a clear topic sentence stating your preference, correct verb tenses, and specific reasons. Avoid unintelligible phrases (e.g., “mom prefer,” “take people,” “take future,” “scenario country”). Keep it to two sentences: present preference and future plan, linked by a connector like however or but.

範例: At the moment I prefer photographing scenes in my own country because China is so large and there are many regions I haven't explored yet. However, in the future I would like to travel abroad to photograph different cultures and landscapes.

× Yes, in my mind we can be more information about the subject in different views and we can product more interesting features through this.

✓ Yes, I think we can get more information about a subject from different views, and we can produce more interesting features this way.

The student used incorrect verbs and structures for present-tense statements. 'In my mind' is unnatural here; 'I think' is correct. 'We can be more information' is ungrammatical: use 'get more information'. 'Product' is a noun; the correct verb is 'produce'. Also use 'from different views' and 'this way' for clarity. Suggestion: use simple present verbs ('think', 'can get', 'can produce') to state general opinions. Grammar problem type ID:6

× I prefer rural areas to take pictures because we can have more natural features in rural areas.

✓ I prefer rural areas for taking pictures because we can find more natural features there.

The phrase 'prefer rural areas to take pictures' uses an incorrect structure; use 'prefer X for doing Y' or 'prefer to take pictures in X'. Also 'have more natural features' is odd; 'find more natural features' or 'see more natural features' is better. Replace the repeated 'in rural areas' with 'there' for cohesion. Suggestion: say 'I prefer rural areas for taking pictures' or 'I prefer to take pictures in rural areas.' Grammar problem type ID:11

× In deep pictures, we can see many birds, trees and flowers.

✓ In close-up photos, we can see many birds, trees, and flowers.

'Deep pictures' is not a correct collocation; likely the student meant 'close-up' or 'detailed' photos. 'Photos' is a more natural word than 'pictures' in this context but both are acceptable. Suggestion: use correct descriptive adjective-noun combinations like 'close-up photos' or 'detailed pictures.' Grammar problem type ID:13

× Now I will mom prefer to take people in my country because China is a very huge country and I still have many areas I've never went through.

✓ Now I prefer to photograph people in my own country because China is a very large country and there are many areas I have never been to.

This sentence has multiple pronoun and word-choice errors. 'Now I will mom prefer' is garbled; likely 'Now I prefer' is intended. 'Take people' should be 'photograph people' or 'take photos of people.' 'My country' is fine but 'my own country' is clearer. 'Very huge' is redundant; use 'very large' or 'huge.' 'I've never went through' mixes tenses and uses the wrong verb; correct form is 'I have never been to.' Also add 'there are' to introduce 'many areas.' Suggestion: use 'I prefer' for current preferences and correct past participle 'been.' Grammar problem type ID:12

× But in the future I will go out to take future in a scenario country.

✓ But in the future I will travel abroad to take photos in other countries.

The original uses incorrect words: 'take future' and 'scenario country' are meaningless here. Use 'will travel abroad' or 'will go abroad' for future plans, and 'take photos in other countries' to express photographing abroad. Maintain simple future tense 'will' for planned actions. Suggestion: say 'I will travel abroad to take photos in other countries.' Grammar problem type ID:7}]}